Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

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Pigeon Woes

pigeon
scavenger >
freedom
 seeker
 in full flight
wingspan stretched across blue skies
a peaceful glide on summer sunlit breezes
in harmony with laws of universal energy
surfing and soaring all day long
  then resting on his
       x   x
       x   x 
       x   x
  pigeon toes



AP: 2nd place, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on October 6, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE, OCTOBER 2019 - BIRD sponsored by DEAR HEART – WIISHKOBI ODE  -  RANKED 6TH

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Eve Roper October 25, 2019 at 6:31 PM How cute, Line, love the shape, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier October 25, 2019 at 8:12 PM Thanks, Eve, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Constance La France October 22, 2019 at 11:47 AM Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem! Line Gauthier October 25, 2019 at 8:12 PM Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire October 21, 2019 at 4:12 PM Great Win Line! Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 7:56 PM Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison October 21, 2019 at 5:15 AM super shape poem Line, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 3:33 PM Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Sandra Adams October 20, 2019 at 2:12 PM love the shape poems you do...i tried a couple now, so thank you and congrats on your win... :) hugs Line Gauthier October 20, 2019 at 10:49 PM Thanks, Sandra. I'll have to check out your new poems.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2019 at 1:05 PM - Congratulations on your win, Line :) - // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier October 20, 2019 at 10:49 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire October 7, 2019 at 11:49 PM Great! If I write a poem about my chickens can we add a comb to it? :) Line Gauthier October 8, 2019 at 6:42 AM Good idea, Timothy.

Regina Mcintosh October 7, 2019 at 8:44 PM This is adorable and shape is so difficult, too. Best in the contest. This is definitely a winner. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 8:55 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Gina.

Gershon Wolf October 6, 2019 at 7:08 PM What a cute, cute, laugh-out-loud ending there, Line! Love it. :) gw Line Gauthier October 6, 2019 at 7:57 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 1:29 PM - Lovely written, Line ... and cute shape :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier October 6, 2019 at 2:16 PM Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.