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poem written based upon this image--an online poetry class assignment

 

Pierrot and the Moon

She stands on the lamppost  
as if the world below  
were only a rumor,  
her cabaret silks  
fluttering like thoughts  
she hasn’t confessed.

The moon leans down,  
slow and luminous,  
a face she’s loved  
from too far away.  
Tonight she kisses it~  
not to claim it,  
but to prove  
that longing  
can be brave.

Her umbrella hangs  
like a question  
she no longer needs.  
Her top hat tilts  
toward possibility.  
And the lamppost,  
that thin spine of earth,  
holds her steady  
as she chooses wonder  
over gravity.

Some say she’s foolish.  
Some say she’s dreaming.  
But Pierrot knows  
the hidden message:  
the heart climbs  
where logic won’t,  
and sometimes  
the impossible  
is simply waiting  
for someone  
to touch it.
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Hind Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 11:02 PM
lovely!
George Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:47 PM
"the heart climbs where logic won’t, and sometimes the impossible is simply waiting for someone to touch it." Dear Sara, how masterfully you have pictured the nature of human mind that dreams for the impossible, though there may be no logic in it. The brash act of the Pierrot standing at the tip of a post and trying to kiss the moon is so interestingly conveyed. The image too is so impressive. I smiled to myself reading this poem. The conclusion is superb.
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 5:00 PM
Ahhh!!! the heart climbs where logic won’t, and sometimes the impossible is simply waiting for someone to touch it. I really like this part, Sara B. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:27 PM
Wow! Well written. Great apologies. I enjoyed this interesting poem :
Goldsmith Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:32 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun ~  write/picture you have here. Love Both...  I wish I could kiss the moon. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...........
Smith  Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:35 AM
A luminous, finely balanced free-verse piece: the short, airy lines let Pierrot seem suspended between earth and dream, while the recurring images of lamppost, umbrella, silk, and moon create a graceful cabaret-fantasy world. I especially love how longing is framed not as weakness but as courage—“the heart climbs / where logic won’t” gives the poem its tender, uplifting core.
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