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Pierce My Heart

Your love's arrow has pierced my heart
From my lips I must impart
Cupid's arrow has hit home
But I only want to be alone
Seems your heart has been split in two
For I do not love you
Forgive this heart breaking tale
Tis a cold heart you did impale

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7/29/19

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/4/2019 9:07:00 PM

My tears are flowing freely...love unwanted...so very heartbreaking! Red roses dashed on the pavement, the glass shattered, yet... The sweet taste of remembrances, are often worth every shard. Hope you win my friend. Ann

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/4/2019 9:19:00 PM

Your kind words and wonderful words are better than any win. Thank you so much Ann

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/30/2019 9:18:00 AM

Excellent take on the challenge, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/30/2019 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Line!