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Pierce My Heart

Your love's arrow has pierced my heart From my lips I must impart Cupid's arrow has hit home But I only want to be alone Seems your heart has been split in two For I do not love you Forgive this heart breaking tale Tis a cold heart you did impale Impaled Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Slausin 7/29/19

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/4/2019 9:07:00 PM

My tears are flowing freely...love unwanted...so very heartbreaking! Red roses dashed on the pavement, the glass shattered, yet... The sweet taste of remembrances, are often worth every shard. Hope you win my friend. Ann

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/4/2019 9:19:00 PM

Your kind words and wonderful words are better than any win. Thank you so much Ann

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/30/2019 9:18:00 AM

Excellent take on the challenge, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/30/2019 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Line!