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Pierce Deeply, Cupid

I stand beneath a moon so bright and ask for you to hear my plight I yearn to know my love's delights for that, I'd wait a thousand nights My plea is gentle and polite my wish is simple and forthright I need your help, oh wondrous sprite to bind our hearts, forever tight I pray my lover's heart's your sight and trust your aim be true and right I beg you, stretch your bow string tight and send your arrow on its flight Pierce deeply, Cupid, this I write and make our love come true this night

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Date: 2/19/2015 8:03:00 PM
Lovely for Valentine's Day <3
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David Brown
Date: 2/20/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Crystal, glad you enjoyed it. Hope you had a great Valentine's day.
Date: 2/17/2015 11:36:00 AM
Hi David. Very enjoyable to read and it's written so well. I really enjoyed it. Thanks much.
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David Brown
Date: 2/17/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Trevor for the very kind words. Look forward to reading your poems. David
Date: 2/16/2015 7:26:00 PM
Cute write...sire. Feel good rhyme and content. Hope your effort had a positive response...Smiles from the thousand isles...:D Kim
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David Brown
Date: 2/16/2015 8:56:00 PM
Thank you Kim, for the very kind words and smiles.
Date: 2/15/2015 10:05:00 PM
Oh...this is thrilling and beautiful. :) I hope you don't have to wait a thousand nights, David. Lovely poem....Hugs
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David Brown
Date: 2/16/2015 12:42:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, hope you had a lovely Valentine's day. David

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