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Poetry/Rhyme/Pie-In-The-Sky-Dream
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Written, September 24, 2024
For the International Contest, Pie-In-The-Sky
Sponsor, Suzette Richards, Judged 10/02/2024

Second Place

"Pie-In-The-Sky is an idiom for something that you
hope will happen but is very unlikely to happen."

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Pie-In-The-Sky-Dream



So sublime my dream that I want to scream,
for a guy who is a sweet offbeat character;
he is kind, gentle and helps where he can, 
this sort of wonderful man appeals to me !
I wish that I could be his forever girl friend,
with love to transcend that grows over time.

dreamrhyme

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Linda Alice Fowler

October 2, 2024 at 7:13 AM

Super internal rhyming Constance. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France

October 4, 2024 at 11:40 AM

Linda, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, Constance

John Read

September 26, 2024 at 8:58 AM

Dreams do come true Constance.

Constance La France

September 27, 2024 at 1:44 PM

John, thank you for the comment, hope so, Constance

Sally Eslinger

September 25, 2024 at 6:34 AM

Dear Constance, this wish is so very had by so many, and so sweet i was broadly smiling by the end. Love the easy flow with its gentle rhymes tat you ink to such a high hope, adding to the effect of the theme. Bravo!

Constance La France

September 27, 2024 at 1:45 PM

Sally, thank you for the nice comment, and compliment, Constance