Pie-In-The-Sky

The full moon shines very bright, When full it give off a pretty lite. Is it made of cheese, I want some with crackers please. If only I could get a big bite.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Lol…moon cheese and crackers :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. Want some moon cheese/crackers tonight??? Hahaha!!! I enjoyed writing this fun write. "Smile"  Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away.....................
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Too late for the cheese. Men on the first landing ate it. You make me smile.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. What sad news to hear they ate all the cheese. Guess that is why the moon has gotten smaller. Hahaha!!! I am so glad I can make you smile. That makes my day a happy one. "Smile"  Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away.....................
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Such a clever connection, Paula, a lovely Limerick - wonder if the first astronauts had their fill of cheese and if they brought some back with them? Nursery Rhyme Land combined with reality. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you found my fun moon limerick write to be Such a clever connection. Yes, this one is a little Nursery Rhyme combined with a little reality. The astronauts did Not tell. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away.....................
Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha! This is sooooooo cute, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you found my fun moon limerick write to be  sooooooo cute. I had fun writing about the moon as if it was made from cheese. It is, right???Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away.....................
Edmonds  Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Paula,, you might bite off more than you can chew, take a knife and cut a slice. Love the Lim… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. Oh yes, a thin slice will do. Make it last longer. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away............
Narain Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:19 AM
Nice and short poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. I love cheese. So Good... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away.....................
Read Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 9:32 AM
I wouldn't mind a bite of that Paula,even if it does sound Crackers.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun/whimsical moon limerick write. It was fun to write... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:53 AM
I love cheese, soft or hard. Great limerick.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you found my fun moon limerick write to be a Great limerick. I love cheese any kind. Yes, soft or hard is for me... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Tor Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:21 AM
I would love to try a bite too Paula. Enjoyed reading this from you this morning. Hope you are well...
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun/whimsical moon limerick write. Great to see you here. I am well. Hope you are OK...Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Radice Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:29 AM
“Moon Pies” came to mind here. :) ..although I believe the US biscuit / cookie called a Moon Pie is much like our UK Wagon Wheels: Chocolate, marshmallow etc..totally devoid of cheese. I’m digressing. Enjoyed the read. Yum! :). Cheers - Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. Oh Yes, the old “Moon Pies.” I love the moon pies like a wheel with Chocolate, marshmallow. Sooooo Good... With this write, I was thinking about how they say, the moon is made of cheese. "Cheers To You" Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Buehler Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:45 PM
Delightful, hilarious and witty, Paula. Much enjoyed! :D
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you found my fun moon limerick write to be Delightful, hilarious/witty. That makes me happy... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Very nicely penned, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you found my fun moon limerick write to be Very nicely penned... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Elliott Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 3:09 PM
Whimsical limerick, Paula. My very best wishes for the contest, poetry friend. Blessings :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support and for your very best wishes for the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun/whimsical moon limerick write. Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Sands Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 3:06 PM
This poem is fun. It brought a smile! I love the moon and cheese :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. I love this gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. "Smile"  Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Creative idea for this one. Cheese pie in the sky. I wonder what kind of cheese. Thanks for sharing your gift with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. Oh yes, the reader can pick the cheese they want. Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:49 PM
cute one, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Thank You for your note, for your support. Glad you found my fun moon limerick write to be a cute one... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Jones Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Great imagination you have. And the moon as a snack would be yummy! Fun limerick and good luck in the contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Thank You for your note, for your support and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun moon limerick write. Oh yes, a great yummy snack for our tummy... Have a fun day with some cheese as you write away......................
Goldsmith Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Pie-In-The-Sky~Date Written:9/25/2024
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