Piecitos

Tus pequeños pies castaños 
Gateando, ágiles 
Pegados en las rocas
Como las patitas de una salamandra  
No se aquietan
Hasta que encuentran el alto
E reposan curvándose sobre la piedra
Mientras desde allí me apuntas 
Cosas que ilustran los relatos 
De la vida de tu hogar 
Satisfecho de que lo que me dices 
Es prontamente demostrado

Sin demora quedan abajo
Impacientes
Y caminan a mí lado
Esos pies cobrizos
Cavando la arena
Formando huellas poco profundas 
Y saltando ligeros
Como se fueran de un niño
Por entre las piedras
“Baryshnikov” dices de mofa
Reimos
Y tus pies ya se van adelante
Como señores de tu voluntad
Hasta que te vayas entero de mi
 

Tan poco han andado a mi lado
Estos chicos pies desnudos 
Pero que gran distancia
Percorrieron en mi corazón.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/7/2016 1:02:00 AM
VIVIANE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Thanks for reading and pushing me further. It does make all the difference in the world. Many blessings be upon you.
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