Pieces of You

I find pieces of you in distorted cosmic dusts 
In falling stars, I see your name so bright 
You are the street signs, whenever I am lost 
When you're here, everything feels so right.  

I figure you in a notional painting 
Discover you between the pages of my book 
In a quandary, you are the silver lining 
I find pieces of you wherever I look.  

You are the star I vision in the sky 
And you're also the yellow in the rainbow I see 
You are the eagle I find so high 
You are everywhere I'll be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Schneiter Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Beautifully conceptualized and wonderfully crafted--an altogether lovely, inspiring composition. I wish I had written it.
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January 13, 2016 at 11:13 PM
HANSTEVEN, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Hansteven, your poem is beautiful and such a nice tribute to your 'you'. Congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest. Sandra
A  Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:41 PM
Nice to see this on a the winning list once again
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January 8, 2016 at 4:56 AM
Wonderful Hansteven, congrats on your win. From Jean
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:41 PM
HANSTEVEN, wonderful win. **SKAT**
Selfa Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 5:13 AM
Thank You SKAT!
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Hansteven, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
Selfa Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Thank you very much Alexis. It's so nice to join your contest!!! Please also do read my other poems! :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 6:06 PM
beautiful one!!
Selfa Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:58 AM
Thank you Andrea!!! :)
A  Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:07 PM
A sweetly expressed poem. Love the art of love. SKAT
Selfa Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 2:17 AM
Thank you SKAT!!! :)
Lane Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 9:50 AM
This is very well written, and absolutely love the last verse.
Selfa Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Thank you. :)
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