Pieces of You

I find pieces of you in distorted cosmic dusts 
In falling stars, I see your name so bright 
You are the street signs, whenever I am lost 
When you're here, everything feels so right.  

I figure you in a notional painting 
Discover you between the pages of my book 
In a quandary, you are the silver lining 
I find pieces of you wherever I look.  

You are the star I vision in the sky 
And you're also the yellow in the rainbow I see 
You are the eagle I find so high 
You are everywhere I'll be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/31/2016 10:12:00 AM
Beautifully conceptualized and wonderfully crafted--an altogether lovely, inspiring composition. I wish I had written it.
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Date: 1/13/2016 11:13:00 PM
HANSTEVEN, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/9/2016 7:56:00 AM
Hansteven, your poem is beautiful and such a nice tribute to your 'you'. Congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest. Sandra
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:41:00 PM
Nice to see this on a the winning list once again
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Date: 1/8/2016 4:56:00 AM
Wonderful Hansteven, congrats on your win. From Jean
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Date: 12/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
HANSTEVEN, wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/20/2015 5:13:00 AM
Thank You SKAT!
Date: 12/15/2015 3:04:00 PM
Hansteven, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
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Date: 12/17/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis. It's so nice to join your contest!!! Please also do read my other poems! :)
Date: 11/29/2015 6:06:00 PM
beautiful one!!
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Date: 11/30/2015 1:58:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!!! :)
Date: 11/29/2015 3:07:00 PM
A sweetly expressed poem. Love the art of love. SKAT
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Date: 11/30/2015 2:17:00 AM
Thank you SKAT!!! :)
Date: 11/27/2015 9:50:00 AM
This is very well written, and absolutely love the last verse.
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Date: 11/28/2015 1:44:00 AM
Thank you. :)
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