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Pieces of Light

Floating high amongst the high clouds Delving into the Earthly rounds Are pieces of light, crystalline They are of sight, but not of sound Bright glowing weeds display outward That is their sure wide description Hoping to meld, one united Their brightness follows inscription Words of power enlightenment Ivory is their shiny filling Hope is beaming from their glowing Excitement for it is stemming This friendly world outside this one Exists in other dimensions Just in crossovers do we find Glowing orbs with their extensions
Russell Sivey Entrant into Mystic Rose's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" contest 1/18/2013

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Date: 1/26/2013 5:03:00 PM
Hi Russell, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
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Date: 1/24/2013 2:54:00 PM
World's within worlds...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2013 12:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Connie
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Date: 1/24/2013 11:31:00 AM
This poem built up and up and up...I could imagine the drums beating lounder and louder as I read. Excellent poem my friend...love love !! Congrats on your win as well !!
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Date: 1/24/2013 10:03:00 AM
Wonderful write, Russell! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/19/2013 8:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this fantasy, was whisked away to another world. Well done Russel.
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Date: 1/19/2013 4:43:00 AM
Dear Sivey, Your poem: A reflection of the divine reality! Thank you!
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Date: 1/18/2013 6:43:00 PM
soup mail! ;) ;)
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Date: 1/18/2013 6:06:00 PM
ahh fantasy! [Russ..Rispetto: abababcc 11 syllables per line? per poetry soup? that's what I did..soup mail me? Octtavia rima is 10 per line hon] Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2013 4:40:00 PM
Yes, Russell, I could see right away this was meant for the fantasy contest. Good imagination. Wish I could think of a fantasy (other than the romantic variety)!
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