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Sponsor : John Lawless 

Contest:  I Almost Tossed It Out 

One of those castoff items that we shove Promptly deemed ‘junk’ upon a second glance. I hid you on the highest shelves above With a slim ‘someday’ of a second chance. In solitude you stoically withstood The cruel confinement you were sentenced to. With dogged demeanour of solid wood You kept your composure as if you knew. Oft butting heads over your checked acts, My late dad and his dad battled so well. Though I delved not in your strategic tracts, My grandsons set you free from jail cell spell. That chessboard - centrepiece I now hold dear, Your pieces shine, each one is carved with love. When boys butt heads I smile in silent cheer, Imagine dads are smiling from above. Artifacts may lose temporary trend, Then triumph tenfold in the timely end.

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Date: 10/27/2024 1:04:00 PM
Hi Margarita, you have woven together a meaningful poem, good luck in the contest.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 10/27/2024 7:38:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 10/17/2024 11:15:00 PM
I really loved how you wrote this, deep meaning in a few ways!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 10/27/2024 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur.

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