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Piece By Piece It Fits

The sound of your voice stuns me.. The gaze we hold when our eyes lock, melts me.. The way we talk long hours everyday, comforts me.. The gentleness of your treatment, keeps me.. Oh! I flutter with your cleverness.. I blush at your complements.. I hide at your naughtyness.. I follow at your truthfulness.. The boken pieces beginning to fit.. Hope they will not anymore split.. Rather, each piece is a good hit.. Worth finishing in a whole lifetime sit... by: olive_eloi 1:45am 11/09/2013 ------------------**** Despite corrupt government.. Despite rampant poverty.. Despite calamities.. Despite even casualties.. Filipinos never gave up Warm welcome, no doubt.. Burning hope, a remark.. Unmoved faith to God, a heavy armor.. Philippines at its finest, anyhow..

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Date: 11/3/2014 3:58:00 PM
Sometimes in life, piece by piece it fits, especially with the right person, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/4/2014 8:41:00 AM
indeed. :)

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