Piece By Piece

The scattered pieces Of my heart gust in the wind With your loving hands You gathered them, piece by piece Your love made it whole again…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callandret Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 3:15 AM
I like! love is still remains and its never gonna slip away.
Mannan Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 11:34 PM
What a touching write dear Wilma. Loved the imagery. Thanks for the comments.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Awww, this is real sweet! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 3:11 PM
How wonderful to have someone who can catch those pieces blowing in the wind and help put you back together again! Love works wonders, doesn't it? Love, Carolyn PS -- you've been posting some terrific poems today, dear friend.
Fraser Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:36 PM
To have someone to gather you whilst you drift is dreamy Wilma, nice Tanka >> James
Knop Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Awesome Soup-Tanka, Wilma! Dit sou groot wees tot aan altyd iemand wat ons kan help om verlore stukkies aanmekaar te sit! Geniet die lees! Al die beste ... Gert!
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August 25, 2010 at 5:16 AM
aww, how lovely. I'm usually the gatherer in life, it would be lovely for someone to be my gatherer...maybe one day. Now, see what you did, haha, turned me all wistful with your beautiful tanka ~ Sharon :)
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