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Pie Thieves

My mother's apple pie straight from oven smiling memories of her warm kitchen frowning, the pie had disappeared from view in the tree house three bad boys eating pie

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/9/2014 10:13:00 AM

Nicely done poem, congrats on the win

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/9/2014 9:54:00 AM

Very bad boys. Congratulations on your win Barbara.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2014 2:26:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan x

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/8/2014 1:06:00 PM

Those nasty boys *lol* but how could they resist? Congrats.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/8/2014 11:55:00 AM

Barbara, lovely slice of pie. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 11:48:00 PM

Utterly delightful way to do this form, Barabara. One of the best pie poems I have seen.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/10/2014 8:52:00 PM

BG hahhaha.. like the humor.. I to did one but not as like this same pie.. :D!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/8/2014 8:49:00 PM

Your mom missed the girl hiding eating the pies with those 3 boys. That evil girl was me, And the pie thieves were my wicked pie thieves cousins. Can you believe it Barb? We saw you too and you were sneaking some of the pie too and stuffing all in your mouth.that was before we took it away. Sorry Barb I did eat it with them bad boys. But couldn't resist your mom's deliciousness. Do you forgive me? Hope you do. After all remember that you had some of it too. Lol...lol..loved your poem and the pies. Good luck in the contest! Hugs! ;)xxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2014 7:15:00 PM

There must be a contest...I'm seeing all these pie poems....can I come over and eat your pie? :) ...hugs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2014 4:07:00 PM

Ah, I'd written but not posted one on my mother's apple pie (not nearly as good a poem as yours). Nothing I've tasted since could compare to Mom's pie. Love the way your pie "disappears" and makes its way to the tree house. A great entry for the contest! Always love seeing your name on the winners' list. Love, carolyn

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/8/2014 4:13:00 PM

Thanks dear, please forgive my tardiness, Ive been so busy, working lots of overtime due to staffing issues..

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2014 1:17:00 PM

I had two bad boys, and one bad girl......hmmm, perhaps I was your neighbor!!??

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2014 8:14:00 AM

Wow such a tasty write Barbara n the wit giving a superb touch!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 4:05:00 AM

LOL love the humour here the title pulled me in and I wasn't disappointed - hope they enjoyed the pie:-) hugs Jan xxx

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/8/2014 3:30:00 AM

Barbara . . . A quite beautiful write here!! In my younger years, I probably would've been one of those "bad boys" enjoying this wonderful apple pie!! All the best, Gary