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PICTURES OF HAPPINESS Smile summer warmth with me and hold me close to dance. Sway me spin me up in sweet embrace Hands to hands we swing~ hop once, twice twist then shout moving left to right. Round! Round against cool light breeze. Some fresh blooms swinging soft under sunshine curve and cotton clouds red, pink, peach, they blush, hush! Amazed me, I run free. My hair rock with the winds. Winds echo sounds Ring! Ring of ice creams! Giggles you and me rush to buy cookies and cream, licking fast while grins touched our lips. Cheeky me, I dot your long nose... Wink! _____________________________________ ***in WALTZE WAVE FORM Sponsor Name: Casarah Nance Contest Name: Get Happy 101 ~~1st Place~~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo 5:25 pm, September 08, 2015

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Neva Romaine

Date: 10/20/2015 9:28:00 AM

Hey Olive, a hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/19/2015 2:10:00 PM

Superb Olive! Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/19/2015 5:14:00 AM

Congrats on ur sweet win olive!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2015 5:41:00 PM

dropping back again with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2015 3:53:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/15/2015 3:48:00 PM

Very sweet write with delightful imagery, Olive! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/14/2015 8:53:00 PM

A delightful write, Olive! Cute and very happy. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! I love that you used the waltz wave in this. Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2015 5:49:00 PM

If I did not say it before, this is SO cute. BTW, white (picket) fences surround the yards of the kids from safe neighborhoods, so they are a symbol for security. james does not have that saying in his country? anyway, I really appreciate the win on my anti-war poem. It's so disgusting to me how kids are being manipulated.

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2015 1:46:00 PM

Mega congratulations little one and your terrific first place. Love it, hugs forever//James xxxx

Skat A

Date: 9/14/2015 1:21:00 PM

Olive, nice win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2015 4:06:00 AM

Wow this is superb take Olive n deserved first place win! Big congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/13/2015 4:46:00 PM

Olive, this wonderful piece is so full of beautiful happy imagery that I can take with me from season to season! Congratulations and a 7 on your top win; and I am so delighted to be in such great company! Warmest regards to you. Pandita

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/13/2015 12:18:00 PM

So joyful and vibrant! Congrats, Olive!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2015 4:19:00 AM

Congrats on your top spot Olive:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/3/2015 6:32:00 AM

thanks much Jan.. =`)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/13/2015 12:34:00 AM

Olive congratulations on this marvelous entry! It was a real winner. Nice job, great effort.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2015 4:23:00 AM

Thanks much Michael.. I really just tried this one..

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 9/12/2015 11:34:00 PM

Wonderful... feeling very happy. Hugs, Bobby

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2015 4:16:00 AM

Thanks much indeed i must display that because thats what the sponsors theme..

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/12/2015 11:17:00 PM

Wow! Olive, this is a beauty. Congratulations on your top win:-)Alexis

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2015 4:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis.. =`)

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/12/2015 8:28:00 PM

What a beautiful and fun poem! It made me happy to read! Thanks for entering my contest and Grats on first place :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2015 5:12:00 AM

thanks much Cassie for seeing my poem a worthy FIRST PLACE WINNER.. =`)

James Inman

Date: 9/11/2015 6:53:00 AM

Sweet lovely expression of joy.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2015 5:10:00 AM

thanks much James.. I am in a happy mood when I've written this one.. =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2015 11:14:00 AM

A lovely and explosive outburst of true happiness, Olive_eloi! Love works wonders:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2015 8:05:00 AM

indeed it works PAul.. hugs back.. thanks for dropping by. `Olive Eloisa..=`)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/9/2015 10:00:00 PM

A radiance bursts forth as this fine poem is read! A real pleasure to read such a positive and happy poem!!A7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2015 8:03:00 AM

thanks much Robert.. =`) weee! this indeed one of the poems that I write just so when I feel happy.. :D!

Len Gasun

Date: 9/9/2015 7:06:00 AM

This is a fascinating poem to read my very dear Amiga, Olive! Joining with you with happiness while reading this sweet and romantic piece. Thank you so much, once again. Have a great weekdays! love lots, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 8:50:00 AM

Leonora my friend, thank you so much for your generous comment i was just challenged with the 101 words.. :D!but i am of course happy.. :)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/9/2015 1:21:00 AM

Tantalizing, exciting, passionate, beautiful. Love your clever creation Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 8:45:00 AM

thank you so much Michael for that wonderful remark.. =`)

Noel Villarosa

Date: 9/9/2015 12:32:00 AM

A lovely read of this piece, Olive. This one is really a big picture of happiness. The words you choose here conform to a genuine model of a healthy life. 7 (^_^) Noel.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/15/2015 5:02:00 AM

Weeeee, I just trie Noel.. this actually my third try in this form and am loving it... =`) I really like the effect.. =`) thanks!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/8/2015 10:56:00 PM

Olive, one can't help but be embraced and greeted by happiness when they read this piece. Great job!:-) Alexis