Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Romanticism

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Pictures of Happiness

PICTURES OF HAPPINESS

Smile
summer
warmth
with me
and hold me 
close to
dance.
Sway me
spin me up
in sweet embrace
Hands to hands
we swing~
hop
once, twice
twist then shout
moving
left
to right.
Round!

Round
against
cool
light breeze.
Some  fresh blooms
swinging
soft
under
sunshine curve
and cotton clouds
red, pink, peach,
they blush,
hush!
Amazed me,
I run free.
My hair
rock
with the
winds.

Winds
echo
sounds
Ring! Ring
of ice creams!
Giggles
you
and me
rush to buy
cookies and cream,
licking fast
while grins
touched
our lips.
Cheeky me,
I dot
your
long nose...
Wink!
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***in WALTZE WAVE FORM

Sponsor Name: Casarah Nance
Contest Name: Get Happy 101
~~1st Place~~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo

5:25 pm, September 08, 2015

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Neva Romaine October 20, 2015 at 9:28 AM Hey Olive, a hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva

Connie Marcum Wong October 19, 2015 at 2:10 PM Superb Olive! Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 19, 2015 at 5:14 AM Congrats on ur sweet win olive!

Jan Allison October 18, 2015 at 5:41 PM dropping back again with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A October 18, 2015 at 3:53 PM Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight September 15, 2015 at 3:48 PM Very sweet write with delightful imagery, Olive! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:53 PM A delightful write, Olive! Cute and very happy. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! I love that you used the waltz wave in this. Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2015 at 5:49 PM If I did not say it before, this is SO cute. BTW, white (picket) fences surround the yards of the kids from safe neighborhoods, so they are a symbol for security. james does not have that saying in his country? anyway, I really appreciate the win on my anti-war poem. It's so disgusting to me how kids are being manipulated.

James Fraser September 14, 2015 at 1:46 PM Mega congratulations little one and your terrific first place. Love it, hugs forever//James xxxx

Skat A September 14, 2015 at 1:21 PM Olive, nice win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 14, 2015 at 4:06 AM Wow this is superb take Olive n deserved first place win! Big congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2015 at 4:46 PM Olive, this wonderful piece is so full of beautiful happy imagery that I can take with me from season to season! Congratulations and a 7 on your top win; and I am so delighted to be in such great company! Warmest regards to you. Pandita

Kp Nunez September 13, 2015 at 12:18 PM So joyful and vibrant! Congrats, Olive!

Jan Allison September 13, 2015 at 4:19 AM Congrats on your top spot Olive:-) hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 3, 2015 at 6:32 AM thanks much Jan.. =`)

Michael Tor September 13, 2015 at 12:34 AM Olive congratulations on this marvelous entry! It was a real winner. Nice job, great effort. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2015 at 4:23 AM Thanks much Michael.. I really just tried this one..

Anindya Mohan Tagore September 12, 2015 at 11:34 PM Wonderful... feeling very happy. Hugs, Bobby Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2015 at 4:16 AM Thanks much indeed i must display that because thats what the sponsors theme..

Alexis Y. September 12, 2015 at 11:17 PM Wow! Olive, this is a beauty. Congratulations on your top win:-)Alexis Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2015 at 4:11 AM Thank you so much Alexis.. =`)

Casarah Nance September 12, 2015 at 8:28 PM What a beautiful and fun poem! It made me happy to read! Thanks for entering my contest and Grats on first place :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2015 at 5:12 AM thanks much Cassie for seeing my poem a worthy FIRST PLACE WINNER.. =`)

James Inman September 11, 2015 at 6:53 AM Sweet lovely expression of joy. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2015 at 5:10 AM thanks much James.. I am in a happy mood when I've written this one.. =`)

Paul Callus September 10, 2015 at 11:14 AM A lovely and explosive outburst of true happiness, Olive_eloi! Love works wonders:) Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2015 at 8:05 AM indeed it works PAul.. hugs back.. thanks for dropping by. `Olive Eloisa..=`)

Robert Lindley September 9, 2015 at 10:00 PM A radiance bursts forth as this fine poem is read! A real pleasure to read such a positive and happy poem!!A7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2015 at 8:03 AM thanks much Robert.. =`) weee! this indeed one of the poems that I write just so when I feel happy.. :D!

Len Gasun September 9, 2015 at 7:06 AM This is a fascinating poem to read my very dear Amiga, Olive! Joining with you with happiness while reading this sweet and romantic piece. Thank you so much, once again. Have a great weekdays! love lots, Leonora Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 8:50 AM Leonora my friend, thank you so much for your generous comment i was just challenged with the 101 words.. :D!but i am of course happy.. :)

Michael Tor September 9, 2015 at 1:21 AM Tantalizing, exciting, passionate, beautiful. Love your clever creation Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 8:45 AM thank you so much Michael for that wonderful remark.. =`)

Noel Villarosa September 9, 2015 at 12:32 AM A lovely read of this piece, Olive. This one is really a big picture of happiness. The words you choose here conform to a genuine model of a healthy life. 7 (^_^) Noel. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 15, 2015 at 5:02 AM Weeeee, I just trie Noel.. this actually my third try in this form and am loving it... =`) I really like the effect.. =`) thanks!

Alexis Y. September 8, 2015 at 10:56 PM Olive, one can't help but be embraced and greeted by happiness when they read this piece. Great job!:-) Alexis

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