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Pictures of Happiness

PICTURES OF HAPPINESS

Smile
summer
warmth
with me
and hold me 
close to
dance.
Sway me
spin me up
in sweet embrace
Hands to hands
we swing~
hop
once, twice
twist then shout
moving
left
to right.
Round!

Round
against
cool
light breeze.
Some  fresh blooms
swinging
soft
under
sunshine curve
and cotton clouds
red, pink, peach,
they blush,
hush!
Amazed me,
I run free.
My hair
rock
with the
winds.

Winds
echo
sounds
Ring! Ring
of ice creams!
Giggles
you
and me
rush to buy
cookies and cream,
licking fast
while grins
touched
our lips.
Cheeky me,
I dot
your
long nose...
Wink!
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***in WALTZE WAVE FORM

Sponsor Name: Casarah Nance
Contest Name: Get Happy 101
~~1st Place~~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo

5:25 pm, September 08, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Neva Romaine Date: 10/20/2015 9:28:00 AM Hey Olive, a hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/19/2015 2:10:00 PM Superb Olive! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/19/2015 5:14:00 AM Congrats on ur sweet win olive! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/18/2015 5:41:00 PM dropping back again with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/18/2015 3:53:00 PM Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 9/15/2015 3:48:00 PM Very sweet write with delightful imagery, Olive! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/14/2015 8:53:00 PM A delightful write, Olive! Cute and very happy. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! I love that you used the waltz wave in this. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/14/2015 5:49:00 PM If I did not say it before, this is SO cute. BTW, white (picket) fences surround the yards of the kids from safe neighborhoods, so they are a symbol for security. james does not have that saying in his country? anyway, I really appreciate the win on my anti-war poem. It's so disgusting to me how kids are being manipulated. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/14/2015 1:46:00 PM Mega congratulations little one and your terrific first place. Love it, hugs forever//James xxxx Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/14/2015 1:21:00 PM Olive, nice win. SKAT Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/14/2015 4:06:00 AM Wow this is superb take Olive n deserved first place win! Big congrats! Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 9/13/2015 4:46:00 PM Olive, this wonderful piece is so full of beautiful happy imagery that I can take with me from season to season! Congratulations and a 7 on your top win; and I am so delighted to be in such great company! Warmest regards to you. Pandita Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 9/13/2015 12:18:00 PM So joyful and vibrant! Congrats, Olive! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/13/2015 4:19:00 AM Congrats on your top spot Olive:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/3/2015 6:32:00 AM thanks much Jan.. =`)

Michael Tor Date: 9/13/2015 12:34:00 AM Olive congratulations on this marvelous entry! It was a real winner. Nice job, great effort. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2015 4:23:00 AM Thanks much Michael.. I really just tried this one..

Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 9/12/2015 11:34:00 PM Wonderful... feeling very happy. Hugs, Bobby Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2015 4:16:00 AM Thanks much indeed i must display that because thats what the sponsors theme..

Alexis Y. Date: 9/12/2015 11:17:00 PM Wow! Olive, this is a beauty. Congratulations on your top win:-)Alexis Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2015 4:11:00 AM Thank you so much Alexis.. =`)

Casarah Nance Date: 9/12/2015 8:28:00 PM What a beautiful and fun poem! It made me happy to read! Thanks for entering my contest and Grats on first place :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/28/2015 5:12:00 AM thanks much Cassie for seeing my poem a worthy FIRST PLACE WINNER.. =`)

James Inman Date: 9/11/2015 6:53:00 AM Sweet lovely expression of joy. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/28/2015 5:10:00 AM thanks much James.. I am in a happy mood when I've written this one.. =`)

Paul Callus Date: 9/10/2015 11:14:00 AM A lovely and explosive outburst of true happiness, Olive_eloi! Love works wonders:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/23/2015 8:05:00 AM indeed it works PAul.. hugs back.. thanks for dropping by. `Olive Eloisa..=`)

Robert Lindley Date: 9/9/2015 10:00:00 PM A radiance bursts forth as this fine poem is read! A real pleasure to read such a positive and happy poem!!A7 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/23/2015 8:03:00 AM thanks much Robert.. =`) weee! this indeed one of the poems that I write just so when I feel happy.. :D!

Len Gasun Date: 9/9/2015 7:06:00 AM This is a fascinating poem to read my very dear Amiga, Olive! Joining with you with happiness while reading this sweet and romantic piece. Thank you so much, once again. Have a great weekdays! love lots, Leonora Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/16/2015 8:50:00 AM Leonora my friend, thank you so much for your generous comment i was just challenged with the 101 words.. :D!but i am of course happy.. :)

Michael Tor Date: 9/9/2015 1:21:00 AM Tantalizing, exciting, passionate, beautiful. Love your clever creation Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/16/2015 8:45:00 AM thank you so much Michael for that wonderful remark.. =`)

Noel Villarosa Date: 9/9/2015 12:32:00 AM A lovely read of this piece, Olive. This one is really a big picture of happiness. The words you choose here conform to a genuine model of a healthy life. 7 (^_^) Noel. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/15/2015 5:02:00 AM Weeeee, I just trie Noel.. this actually my third try in this form and am loving it... =`) I really like the effect.. =`) thanks!

Alexis Y. Date: 9/8/2015 10:56:00 PM Olive, one can't help but be embraced and greeted by happiness when they read this piece. Great job!:-) Alexis Login to Reply

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