Picture the Sun

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I tried a classic sonnet.

Heat teasingly extraordinary skies Staining earth crimson treasure Sophisticated disguise I read the skies hoping for Proud sunset extraordinair And the next after next picture is to be Probably the most precise Explanation of an exclamation of Nature ever shone, honing her skill Masterfully from sun to Sun win is one the golden Crown Magnificent show manufactured By heaven dawn to dusk striking awe On every face observing This majestic curve, a sphere. A perfect near. A distant here.

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