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Picture Perfect Haiku 2

lifting up your face
smiling in the bright sunshine
beautiful pansy

06~17~15

beautyflowerhaiku

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Edward Ebbs

June 26, 2015 at 8:54 PM

These are beautiful pansies! Great write and congrats :)

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:19 PM

Thanks Ed I see now I made an error with the final line - never mind:-( Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

June 26, 2015 at 11:26 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you, Jan! Miss you, my friend. hugs!

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:19 PM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

June 26, 2015 at 9:32 AM

way to Jan on your top ten win, your sure no Pansie :o)

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:18 PM

Thanks Robert:-) Hugs Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 9:16 PM

Congratulations, Jan. Those were such CUTE pansies!! (I am finding a little time to do as much Soup as possible before i leave in the a.m)

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:18 PM

oops I made error with final word - flower would have been better lol - hey ho who cares lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

June 25, 2015 at 10:18 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win, Jan. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 9:10 AM

So glad to see this one on the winners list. They really do look like they are smiling.

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 5:05 AM

great haiku Jan congrats on placing hugs

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Skat A

June 25, 2015 at 1:23 AM

Jan, it was all good until I read the ending word.. I smile, enjoyed... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Jan Allison

July 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford

June 19, 2015 at 4:27 PM

Charming picture and the poem. Good luck in the contest. I entered, too. But I have no picture with mine. I wonder if that is a must? Blessings, Darlene

Darlene Gifford

June 19, 2015 at 4:42 PM

Thanks, Jan, and yes, your picture goes very well with your poem. A sure winner!

Jan Allison

June 19, 2015 at 4:31 PM

No there are many who can't post pictures I just found this one and thought it went well with my poem:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

June 19, 2015 at 12:59 PM

Beautiful...both pansy and haiku! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

June 19, 2015 at 1:09 PM

Thanks Paul - every time I see this image it reminds me of Ronald McDonald lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Courtney Courtney

June 18, 2015 at 1:41 AM

lovely ^7 score

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 2:14 AM

Thanks so much Courtney:-) Hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

June 17, 2015 at 11:55 PM

Lovely Haiku, Jan. I wondered where the picture was- didn't realise one submitted one's own. Good luck, my little flower. Viv x

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 1:02 AM

Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 17, 2015 at 10:12 PM

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Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 1:01 AM

Replied :-) thank you:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 17, 2015 at 10:09 PM

they REALLY do look like cute little faces. how sweet, Jan.

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 1:01 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

June 17, 2015 at 8:37 PM

looks perfect to me!

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 1:00 AM

Aww thank you and send my love to Mama Bear:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

June 17, 2015 at 5:31 PM

they are such cheerful smiles in a garden Jan pity they have very little scent lovely haiku gl in contest hugs

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 1:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Shadow hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

June 17, 2015 at 4:48 PM

Don't you just love their sweet little faces? This is a lovely haiku Jan. Hugs, Connie

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 12:59 AM

They always make me feel happy and smile Connie - such bright jewelled colours and those cute little faces:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

June 17, 2015 at 2:19 PM

This is a beautiful poem filled with poetic imagery that adorn the words with a brush of rainbow light. Emile. #7

Jan Allison

June 18, 2015 at 12:58 AM

Thanks for such a beautiful comment Emile:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

June 17, 2015 at 11:36 AM

bringing in such glory of a flower; what a fine 'ku, jan... huggs.. SOUPIE

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:58 AM

I don't know if I personified them too much ... and is that appropriate for a haiku - but they do look like they are smiling:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

June 17, 2015 at 11:35 AM

picture perfect indeed, enjoyed:)... luv p.d.

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:57 AM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

June 17, 2015 at 11:02 AM

A beautiful moment with those faces. Love, daver

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:57 AM

Thanks so much Daver - they really do look like they are smiling:-) Hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

June 17, 2015 at 9:23 AM

This is really lovely!! Look at 'Lion flower' too.. :D :D

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:56 AM

I will Sneha:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

June 17, 2015 at 9:18 AM

Beautiful pen, jan a 7 and a winner. Hugs eve

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:56 AM

Thanks Eve - i hope the sponsor likes it:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

June 17, 2015 at 7:58 AM

Wow I never really noticed but they do look like little faces! *big smiles*

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:55 AM

I think the image looks like Ronald McDonald lol:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

June 17, 2015 at 7:49 AM

cheerful, sunny, lovely, thanks

Jan Allison

June 17, 2015 at 11:55 AM

Thanks Judy:-) Hugs jan xx

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