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Picture Perfect Haiku 2

lifting up your face
smiling in the bright sunshine
beautiful pansy

06~17~15

beautyflowerhaiku

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Edward Ebbs

Date: 6/26/2015 8:54:00 PM

These are beautiful pansies! Great write and congrats :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Ed I see now I made an error with the final line - never mind:-( Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/26/2015 11:26:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you, Jan! Miss you, my friend. hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 6/26/2015 9:32:00 AM

way to Jan on your top ten win, your sure no Pansie :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:18:00 PM

Thanks Robert:-) Hugs Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan. Those were such CUTE pansies!! (I am finding a little time to do as much Soup as possible before i leave in the a.m)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:18:00 PM

oops I made error with final word - flower would have been better lol - hey ho who cares lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/25/2015 10:18:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win, Jan. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 9:10:00 AM

So glad to see this one on the winners list. They really do look like they are smiling.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2015 5:05:00 AM

great haiku Jan congrats on placing hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:23:00 AM

Jan, it was all good until I read the ending word.. I smile, enjoyed... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/19/2015 4:27:00 PM

Charming picture and the poem. Good luck in the contest. I entered, too. But I have no picture with mine. I wonder if that is a must? Blessings, Darlene

Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/19/2015 4:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, and yes, your picture goes very well with your poem. A sure winner!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2015 4:31:00 PM

No there are many who can't post pictures I just found this one and thought it went well with my poem:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/19/2015 12:59:00 PM

Beautiful...both pansy and haiku! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2015 1:09:00 PM

Thanks Paul - every time I see this image it reminds me of Ronald McDonald lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Courtney Courtney

Date: 6/18/2015 1:41:00 AM

lovely ^7 score

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 2:14:00 AM

Thanks so much Courtney:-) Hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/17/2015 11:55:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, Jan. I wondered where the picture was- didn't realise one submitted one's own. Good luck, my little flower. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:02:00 AM

Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 10:12:00 PM

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Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:01:00 AM

Replied :-) thank you:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 10:09:00 PM

they REALLY do look like cute little faces. how sweet, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:01:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2015 8:37:00 PM

looks perfect to me!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:00:00 AM

Aww thank you and send my love to Mama Bear:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/17/2015 5:31:00 PM

they are such cheerful smiles in a garden Jan pity they have very little scent lovely haiku gl in contest hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:00:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Shadow hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/17/2015 4:48:00 PM

Don't you just love their sweet little faces? This is a lovely haiku Jan. Hugs, Connie

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 12:59:00 AM

They always make me feel happy and smile Connie - such bright jewelled colours and those cute little faces:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/17/2015 2:19:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem filled with poetic imagery that adorn the words with a brush of rainbow light. Emile. #7

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 12:58:00 AM

Thanks for such a beautiful comment Emile:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2015 11:36:00 AM

bringing in such glory of a flower; what a fine 'ku, jan... huggs.. SOUPIE

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:58:00 AM

I don't know if I personified them too much ... and is that appropriate for a haiku - but they do look like they are smiling:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2015 11:35:00 AM

picture perfect indeed, enjoyed:)... luv p.d.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:57:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 6/17/2015 11:02:00 AM

A beautiful moment with those faces. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:57:00 AM

Thanks so much Daver - they really do look like they are smiling:-) Hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/17/2015 9:23:00 AM

This is really lovely!! Look at 'Lion flower' too.. :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:56:00 AM

I will Sneha:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/17/2015 9:18:00 AM

Beautiful pen, jan a 7 and a winner. Hugs eve

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:56:00 AM

Thanks Eve - i hope the sponsor likes it:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/17/2015 7:58:00 AM

Wow I never really noticed but they do look like little faces! *big smiles*

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:55:00 AM

I think the image looks like Ronald McDonald lol:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 6/17/2015 7:49:00 AM

cheerful, sunny, lovely, thanks

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2015 11:55:00 AM

Thanks Judy:-) Hugs jan xx

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