Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Picture Perfect

Cascading water

                                      dancing like ballerina

                                                down the green mountain
 
                                                              singing a sweet melody

                                                                              God-created lullaby




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Kim Merryman October 22, 2013 at 10:19 PM A beautiful tanka, Kash! Very picturesque and I also like the way you formatted it. Great work! This one's going in my favs! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi August 26, 2013 at 11:40 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A August 22, 2013 at 9:09 PM CONGRATULATIONS KASH Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A August 22, 2013 at 8:08 PM Kash, it is a lovely win... always..Linda

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2013 at 3:26 PM Oh, Kash, I had no idea you wrote this one. Is it a new one? I don't think I have seen it before. Congrats for the HM. This one is very pretty.

Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2013 at 12:31 PM Good one Kash, congratulations.

Mustapha Mohammed August 20, 2013 at 8:31 PM Creative and lovely work Kash. I like it.

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2013 at 4:19 PM Uniquely creative work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Expressive of you love of nature and faith in God..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Charmaine Chircop August 20, 2013 at 2:47 PM and how beautiful is this..So very cute kash

Debbie Guzzi August 20, 2013 at 2:07 PM Charming tanka///Kash was my dodoitsu on an overdone theme? did I make a mistake? what did you mean LOL I'm rhyming! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud August 16, 2013 at 8:20 PM wowow!... your words sing so beauitfully, kash!.. much enjoyed with huggs

Ilene Bauer August 16, 2013 at 7:44 AM lovely, kash!

Wilma Neels August 16, 2013 at 6:40 AM Gorgeous write Kash, love the format as well :) you made me smile this afternoon with this gem

Russell Sivey August 15, 2013 at 10:44 PM Wow this is so beautiful, simply a gorgeous write my friend! I am very impressed with the incredible way you have brought the image to life within this illustrious piece! I really loved reading this enlightening piece this evening! Great Work!!

Barbara Gorelick August 15, 2013 at 9:36 PM this is just what I needed this evening. So gorgeous..the format really fits the words. BG

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2013 at 8:46 PM Kash, all I have to say is PICTURE PERFECT! flawless, and sweet. I never imagined God's voice to be this gentle and free... :-)... wishing you luck...Linda

Carrie Richards August 15, 2013 at 8:21 PM I love how the poem cascades, just as it is flowing like the water. Beautiful ! (picture perfect!)