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Picture Perfect

Cascading water

                                      dancing like ballerina

                                                down the green mountain
 
                                                              singing a sweet melody

                                                                              God-created lullaby




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Kim Merryman

Date: 10/22/2013 10:19:00 PM

A beautiful tanka, Kash! Very picturesque and I also like the way you formatted it. Great work! This one's going in my favs! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2013 11:40:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 8/22/2013 9:09:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS KASH Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2013 8:08:00 PM

Kash, it is a lovely win... always..Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2013 3:26:00 PM

Oh, Kash, I had no idea you wrote this one. Is it a new one? I don't think I have seen it before. Congrats for the HM. This one is very pretty.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2013 12:31:00 PM

Good one Kash, congratulations.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/20/2013 8:31:00 PM

Creative and lovely work Kash. I like it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2013 4:19:00 PM

Uniquely creative work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Expressive of you love of nature and faith in God..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/20/2013 2:47:00 PM

and how beautiful is this..So very cute kash

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/20/2013 2:07:00 PM

Charming tanka///Kash was my dodoitsu on an overdone theme? did I make a mistake? what did you mean LOL I'm rhyming! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2013 8:20:00 PM

wowow!... your words sing so beauitfully, kash!.. much enjoyed with huggs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/16/2013 7:44:00 AM

lovely, kash!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/16/2013 6:40:00 AM

Gorgeous write Kash, love the format as well :) you made me smile this afternoon with this gem

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/15/2013 10:44:00 PM

Wow this is so beautiful, simply a gorgeous write my friend! I am very impressed with the incredible way you have brought the image to life within this illustrious piece! I really loved reading this enlightening piece this evening! Great Work!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/15/2013 9:36:00 PM

this is just what I needed this evening. So gorgeous..the format really fits the words. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2013 8:46:00 PM

Kash, all I have to say is PICTURE PERFECT! flawless, and sweet. I never imagined God's voice to be this gentle and free... :-)... wishing you luck...Linda