Viv Wigley Poet Sedoka

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Facing the camera
cockatiel sat on your head
your mouth and eyes are smiling
much in the same way
I still frame your warmth and love
my glass and wood are sorrows


For contest ' Oh how I miss you', sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

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Rob Carmack October 30, 2017 at 12:28 PM Love is priceless, that is why we pay for it forever, but it is worth it. I especially like the last line.

Jean Murray August 23, 2017 at 4:39 PM I feel your sorrow in this Viv. Your wife?

James Inman August 16, 2017 at 2:59 PM Sad ending to a lovely poem.

Agnes Krampe August 15, 2017 at 1:20 AM Such a unique image, and I especially love the last two lines.

Charlie Smith August 14, 2017 at 3:47 PM Well done Viv, love the form, beautiful entry, best wishes...