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My brother swings with glee. Dear family looks on smilingly from our picnic spot. Pleasure hums in playing children’s voices. Cool splash of blue - river run; summer fun. Aug. 28, 2021 for Ever Roper's 'Double Tetractys 8' Poetry Contest Picture #2 chosen

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Date: 9/14/2021 10:54:00 AM
A beautiful picture of a family picnic - so much fun and so visual Andrea! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2021 7:18:00 PM
Andrea, nicely done. Congrats.
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Date: 9/9/2021 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 9/9/2021 5:59:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery, flow, and a change for the second stanza. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/9/2021 5:21:00 PM
Love your write. Amazing. Congrats on top win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/6/2021 10:17:00 AM
Deligthful, Andrea ~
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Date: 8/29/2021 11:18:00 AM
A fun write!
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Date: 8/29/2021 8:59:00 AM
A nice entry into the contest Andrea. Good luck..Delice
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Date: 8/29/2021 3:32:00 AM
Strictly speaking Andrea,a tetractys in Ray's originsl conception was a conplete thought in one verse of his syllabic form..just saying
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Brian Strand
Date: 8/29/2021 2:29:00 PM
Yes Andrea,I know one of the failings here on PS something you learn to live with in regard to your forms
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/29/2021 9:28:00 AM
also she asked for "double" one and there is no place to put a double one!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/29/2021 9:27:00 AM
oh, I just did this how the sponsor seemed to want it. I went to see how see she did them on her own page. This was her format!!
Date: 8/29/2021 2:41:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful, Andrea, and it brings back to mind some of my personal memories when life was carefree and fun. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/28/2021 3:16:00 PM
Cute one - good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2021 11:58:00 AM
Simple but full of fun. better than mine any way. Hugs.
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Date: 8/28/2021 10:38:00 AM
So fun. Very nice :)
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Date: 8/28/2021 10:29:00 AM
So lovely... captured the essence of the beautiful picture by Eve... Best wishes and hugs sweet friend... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/28/2021 10:26:00 AM
A happy picture of a family fun summer day, makes me feel like I'm there!
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