Picnic

~Picnic~ There once was a girl from Staffordshire Who wanted to picnic but the weather was dire She packed up her basket And then threw a gasket As the field she went to was a quagmire ©BY ~GG~ 8/06/2012

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Harry Horsman

Date: 11/8/2012 7:30:00 AM

i was away when you wrote these wonders... bet your beautiful when you blow gaskets......this is great.... did you wear your wellies?

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/8/2012 7:54:00 AM

No, can't wear wellies lol xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2012 8:07:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 7:19:00 AM

Mandy congrats on your win..David

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2012 8:59:00 PM

Good one, Mandy. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Erich Goller

Date: 6/12/2012 2:25:00 PM

Congratulation Mandy, a fun limerick, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 6/12/2012 8:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win Mandy. I like this one.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/12/2012 8:49:00 AM

Hey Mandy, lovely limerick, congrats and thanks for your comments :) Jag

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2012 7:00:00 AM

I really like this one..Congrats on your win..I have not heard the word quagmire in a very long time nor I have read it anywhere..I am glad to see it again for it brought back memories when my parents used that word..Thanks for stopping by...Sara