Picnic

~Picnic~ There once was a girl from Staffordshire Who wanted to picnic but the weather was dire She packed up her basket And then threw a gasket As the field she went to was a quagmire
©BY ~GG~ 8/06/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 7:30 AM
i was away when you wrote these wonders... bet your beautiful when you blow gaskets......this is great.... did you wear your wellies?
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 7:54 AM
No, can't wear wellies lol xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Congrats on your win!
Williams Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Mandy congrats on your win..David
Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Good one, Mandy. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Goller Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 2:25 PM
Congratulation Mandy, a fun limerick, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Tsiluma Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Congrats on your win Mandy. I like this one.
Nair Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 8:49 AM
Hey Mandy, lovely limerick, congrats and thanks for your comments :) Jag
Brown Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 7:00 AM
I really like this one..Congrats on your win..I have not heard the word quagmire in a very long time nor I have read it anywhere..I am glad to see it again for it brought back memories when my parents used that word..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Taylor Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Congrats, Mandy. Entertaining. Enjoyed. Thanks for your recent comments. hugs, Ralph
Arowolo Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Oh!wonderful piece,Mandy...Great job,I love this piece...Congratulations on your win...XOXO..
A  Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Thank you*luv~Skat
A   Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 12:52 PM
MANDY, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK IN SKAT'S CONTEST,,, XOX~PD
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 7:41 PM
Mandy I enjoyed the humor of this one. Great 'ire rhymes!!
Williams Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 4:48 PM
ha Mandy, been there done at the Kilnsey show..David xx
Christian Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 1:07 PM
aww nice poem and thanks for your kind comments. God bless you from diane
Rozario Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Very nice...enjoyed
Horne Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 10:35 AM
LOL, love it. Many congrats on your wins : )
Grisetti Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 9:38 AM
I guess there's a lot of rain right now. Very cute.
Poet Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 9:05 AM
Enjoyed the humour very much Mandy...best wishes.
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