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Pickle Pucker

I handed toddler sour pickle I bribed him with a shiny nickel Took a little bite And to my delight His puckered face, gave me a tickle Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/17/2010 10:54:00 AM
Caryl, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:17:00 PM
this is SO cute. I would have placed this one higher! congratulations, Caryl. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 2:19:00 PM
hehe, oh my Caryl I can just picture his face, yuchers. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Caryl in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:42:00 AM
Cute Limerick Caryl. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:16:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful Limerick and its great content luv.. enjoy your sweet victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv..my friend..
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Date: 11/14/2010 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2010 6:46:00 PM
so sweet and so very cute enjoyed your limerick,,all the best in all the contests,,I want to tell you Thank You for all your visits and want you to know they are appreciated and enjoyed,,,Thank You again,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:09:00 PM
Well, you got the rhyme. I like the last line. I could feel that face. Good for you! Thank you as always from Gerard. Best to you!
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:37:00 PM
very cute way to do the contest I hope to come up with something too. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/12/2010 11:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Caryl. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2010 4:51:00 PM
cute poor fellow had been had!
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Date: 10/11/2010 4:12:00 PM
That must have been quite a sour pickle, Caryl! Fun limerick for the contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/11/2010 1:35:00 PM
Hi Caryl Ah! How mean.But I'm just as mean I laughed. Good luck with it in PDs contest luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 10/11/2010 12:12:00 PM
love it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/11/2010 12:09:00 PM
Very humorous and hilarious write, Caryl,
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