Pickle Pucker

I handed toddler sour pickle
I bribed him with a shiny nickel
Took a little bite
And to my delight
His puckered face, gave me a tickle

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Caryl, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
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November 15, 2010 at 9:17 PM
this is SO cute. I would have placed this one higher! congratulations, Caryl. LUv, Andrea
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November 15, 2010 at 2:19 PM
hehe, oh my Caryl I can just picture his face, yuchers. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
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November 15, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your win Caryl in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
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November 15, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Cute Limerick Caryl. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place, Agape, Moses
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November 14, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful Limerick and its great content luv.. enjoy your sweet victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv..my friend..
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November 14, 2010 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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November 5, 2010 at 6:46 PM
so sweet and so very cute enjoyed your limerick,,all the best in all the contests,,I want to tell you Thank You for all your visits and want you to know they are appreciated and enjoyed,,,Thank You again,,Blessings..Cecil
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October 21, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Well, you got the rhyme. I like the last line. I could feel that face. Good for you! Thank you as always from Gerard. Best to you!
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October 14, 2010 at 8:37 PM
very cute way to do the contest I hope to come up with something too. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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October 12, 2010 at 11:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Caryl. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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October 11, 2010 at 4:51 PM
cute poor fellow had been had!
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October 11, 2010 at 4:12 PM
That must have been quite a sour pickle, Caryl! Fun limerick for the contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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October 11, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Hi Caryl Ah! How mean.But I'm just as mean I laughed. Good luck with it in PDs contest luv June(Sylvia)
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October 11, 2010 at 12:12 PM
love it, good luck in the contest
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October 11, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Very humorous and hilarious write, Caryl,
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