Picking Up Seashells

Seashell Symphony,
On ear, rhapsody playing.
Ocean Conducting!


Dedicated to Raul...you're a very good teacher...tell me what you think?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hilliker Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 11:02 PM
Great Haiku, Martin. I hope Raul appreciates it too. Thanks, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 11:11 AM
I love this one. I love the sound that's produced from the shell placed to my ear. Keep writing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Nicely done, love the ocean, Doris means of the sea:)
Foster Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 9:34 AM
A very lovely work indeed Marty, I thank you for sharing the wonderful imagery. God Bless, always, Adell
Sheart Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Hi Martin, Oh how in tune to nature's song you are! I love this Haiku. I can hear the music in my mind with this one. Outstanding, smile..... Thanks for you welcome comment on "Right Path" Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Love Light Truth Patricia
Ryerson Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 4:13 AM
Great work Marty! You are learning this form well! Taught by the the master himself! (Raul)
George   Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 2:15 AM
I think Raul taught you well! Excellent Haiku, dear Martin. Love, lainie
Gorelick Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 11:22 PM
Bu Jove, I think youve got it! This is outstanding. Raul is such a good teacher! Well done. BG
Chircop Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 10:05 PM
Raul is a master of Haikus and a very good poet,artist an person,excellent Haiku infact im addingit to my favs list--bravo--Charma
Moreno Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 9:15 PM
Excellent work, You are a good listener. I like this one and it's going to my fav's...Raul
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