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Picking Up Seashells

Seashell Symphony, On ear, rhapsody playing. Ocean Conducting! Dedicated to Raul...you're a very good teacher...tell me what you think?

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Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/10/2009 11:02:00 PM

Great Haiku, Martin. I hope Raul appreciates it too. Thanks, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2009 11:11:00 AM

I love this one. I love the sound that's produced from the shell placed to my ear. Keep writing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/7/2009 6:52:00 PM

Nicely done, love the ocean, Doris means of the sea:)

Adell Foster

Date: 10/7/2009 9:34:00 AM

A very lovely work indeed Marty, I thank you for sharing the wonderful imagery. God Bless, always, Adell

P Sheart

Date: 10/7/2009 9:07:00 AM

Hi Martin, Oh how in tune to nature's song you are! I love this Haiku. I can hear the music in my mind with this one. Outstanding, smile..... Thanks for you welcome comment on "Right Path" Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Love Light Truth Patricia

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/7/2009 4:13:00 AM

Great work Marty! You are learning this form well! Taught by the the master himself! (Raul)

Elaine George

Date: 10/7/2009 2:15:00 AM

I think Raul taught you well! Excellent Haiku, dear Martin. Love, lainie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/6/2009 11:22:00 PM

Bu Jove, I think youve got it! This is outstanding. Raul is such a good teacher! Well done. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/6/2009 10:05:00 PM

Raul is a master of Haikus and a very good poet,artist an person,excellent Haiku infact im addingit to my favs list--bravo--Charma

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/6/2009 9:15:00 PM

Excellent work, You are a good listener. I like this one and it's going to my fav's...Raul