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Picking One Petal Off a Flower

He loves me

               When  I first saw him,  with a warm smile.

He loves me not

               When our downs were in turmoil, but he still loved me so. 

He loves me 

               With his whole heart and soul.


9/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Eve, such a beautiful free verse poem and what a lovely flower image, well done ~
Sietesantos Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Such beauty in your words which flow effortlessly from your poetic heart! Just awesome, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita
Rose  Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Ah, such beautiful words that seal the deal. Thanks for sharing dear Eve.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so very much my dear and close friend. ~`* Hugs Eve
Vaso Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:44 PM
That is so beautiful Eve, hugs!!
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thank you dear friend. ~`* Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:22 PM
oh so lovely how you ended this one, Eve. I sure enjoyed this one.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Andrea. ~`* Hugs Eve
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Lovely <3
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Maureen. ~`* Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 1:18 PM
breathtaking, eve...huggs
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Nette. ~`* Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Very sweet Eve :)
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Heidi. ~`* Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Always
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Tim, yes always. :') ~`* Hugs Eve
Gondolf Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Enjoyed your sweet love poem, Eve, all the best. John
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you, John. ~`* Hugs Eve
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