Carrie Richards Poet Rondeau

Picking Apples -Rondelet

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Autumn apples

Lean your ladder against the trees

Autumn apples

Rust and green creates a chapel

God's  bounty nestled in the leaves

A taste of harvest scents the breeze

Autumn apples!



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Inspired By Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest "Rondelet Contest"
By Carrie Richards

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 4, 2011 at 2:21 PM Ahh, now I wish we had some apple trees here! Thank you for making me imagine we did, though :) Really enjoyed this Carrie and thank you so much for all your inspiring comments in my poems :) You always make me smile, always a treat to see your name ^_^ I hope all is well with you and your lovely family :D hugs! I see this won, so congrats as well!

Kash Poet August 1, 2011 at 1:29 PM A lovely poem here Carrie...congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2011 at 11:07 AM Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

David Williams August 1, 2011 at 8:41 AM hey Carrie, congrats on your win, David

Joyce Johnson July 31, 2011 at 8:47 PM A lovely lilting piece. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce

John Freeman July 31, 2011 at 8:24 PM Carrie, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 31, 2011 at 6:29 PM pure of pictures in mind~~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~deserve this great placement~~smile for the win~~~*-*junjun

Carolyn Devonshire July 31, 2011 at 5:09 PM Dear Carrie, Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2011 at 5:07 PM Congrats Carrie on a fabulous fourth place win with these amazing entertaining words of poetry luv..

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2011 at 4:02 PM Enchanting as always, even with this short little form. You rock, Carrie. congratulations.

Jack Horne July 31, 2011 at 3:58 PM Many congrats, Carrie : )

Caryl Ramsdale July 31, 2011 at 2:25 PM A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta July 31, 2011 at 2:04 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta July 28, 2011 at 9:13 PM Thanks for the entry, carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 2:46 PM Wonderful creative writing today Carrie. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire July 28, 2011 at 2:14 PM Delightful rondelet, Carrie. Love those juicy tempting apples, though I don't recall any of my students ever bringing one to me. Truly a joyful entry for Dr. Ram's contest and I wish you success, dear. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau July 28, 2011 at 11:34 AM Awesome Carrie ! I am a great longer of the firm feed...*smiles* and this write will go down in mine favz, I'm certain you mind not ! Ooooo apples, me and Noah's glee ! Have a fantastic week love ! Much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2011 at 9:37 PM Thanks for the entry to my contest, Carrie

Francine Roberts July 27, 2011 at 8:45 PM Carrie, you need 7 lines ( AbAabbA)

Nancy Jones July 27, 2011 at 8:34 PM Golden delicious, or MacIntosh? Nice write, Carrie :)

Jl Sadberry July 27, 2011 at 7:07 PM Smile, *^_^* “Sweeet Juicy Delicious Red Crisp Apples = Your Beauty Makes Them Seem & Sound, Sooo Good ~ My Dear Precious & Beautiful Carrie Richards == Very Lovely, Soft & Somewhat Enchanting, Painting My Dear.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Jack Ross Jr. July 27, 2011 at 6:59 PM excellent write Carrie....with love.....old Jack