Sneha Rv Poet Free verse

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Inhale 
   the last you will  
of this planet’s wholesome gift

blowing out  grey cells
     and bits of a life

    ..distance.. 
until a stranger
   

with two
     puffed eyes

and clouded vision


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On the ill-effects of smoking

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Pipping Stars December 24, 2017 at 1:11 PM lol ... love this piece ...

Susan Ashley December 4, 2017 at 7:17 PM Wow Sneha, such powerful, enthralling and contemplative imagery. Congratulations on your excellent win!

Eve Roper December 4, 2017 at 3:27 PM Congratulations,Sneha, this was a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*

Beautiful Scars December 4, 2017 at 5:28 AM lovely poem sweet Sneha, thank you and congrats :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy December 4, 2017 at 2:51 AM Congratulations, Sneha on your win.

Andrea Dietrich November 25, 2017 at 10:33 AM Hurry and write for some more contests, Sneha. I know you can come up with some great ideas!!

Paul Callus November 23, 2017 at 1:34 PM A creative and intriguing poem which gives a new dimension to this visual, Sneha. ~ Congratulations on your lovely win! Regards // paul Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:40 PM Thank you so much; your feedback is very valuable :)

Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2017 at 8:07 PM I really agree with this wonderful entry Sneha. Congratulations on your top placement! : ) Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:37 PM Thank you for your lovely comment! So glad you liked it :)

Constance La France November 21, 2017 at 4:47 PM Sneha, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win ! Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:37 PM Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2017 at 11:55 PM I knew this one would do well. BIG congrats, sweetie Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:35 PM Thank you so much for your time and encouragement dear Andrea :)

Eve Roper November 20, 2017 at 11:55 PM Sneha, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`* Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:35 PM Thank you!

Ram R. V. November 20, 2017 at 4:58 PM Powerful imagery. Congrats, Sneha! Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:33 PM Thank you so much :)

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2017 at 2:53 PM totally disarmed by the unique interpretation of the theme, sneha... beautiful!... warm congrats and thanks for supporting this challenge! Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 12:32 PM Thank you so much for your valuable comments and my placement. Your contests are very encouraging!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2017 at 12:37 PM - Such a great imagery, congratulations on your win Sneha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 11:55 AM Thank you dear Anne Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2017 at 11:54 PM wow, that is deep, Sneha. YOur interpretation of the picture is unique and well thought out! Sneha Rv November 24, 2017 at 11:54 AM I'm so glad you liked it, thanks so much :)

Vijay Pandit November 19, 2017 at 7:26 AM An intriguing write--decorated with charming rare words--a winning poem in my book! Sneha Rv November 19, 2017 at 7:33 PM I have added a footnote below the poem ) Sneha Rv November 19, 2017 at 11:23 AM Thanks so much for your comments and encouragement! :)

Arthur Vaso November 19, 2017 at 2:10 AM This is so beautiful, makes one contemplate! Sneha Rv November 19, 2017 at 7:34 PM I have added a footnote below if you'd like to see : Sneha Rv November 19, 2017 at 11:22 AM Thank you so much. Glad you think so :)