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Piano Crystalline

the subtle notes start tentatively ....soon building to a crescendo. for Rick's "Piano" contest

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John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 10:12:00 AM

Way to go Francine, good to see you at the top with this 2nt place. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 6:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's Contest! Always, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Francine in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2011 5:05:00 PM

just like love! Nice emotion in a few words! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2011 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's contest, Francine! Always, Annalise

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/12/2011 12:13:00 PM

This was beautiful words that deserve a 2nd.place win Francine.Thanks for your comment I've been sick and haven't been online for a few days but I'M BACK.~LUV~Teresa

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/12/2011 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. God Bless Phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2011 9:31:00 AM

Excellent crystalline Francine!congrats on your well deserved big win!-kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2011 5:53:00 AM

you pulled me in, francine! congrats for the big win in this contest!

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2011 3:59:00 AM

Nice choice of words - congrats !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 9:58:00 PM

Congratulations, Francine. We both liked that T word! LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/10/2011 8:36:00 PM

could be a nice metaphore for love making here. Nice write, Charles

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/10/2011 5:29:00 PM

Nice one Francine.....I can hear it build...note by note!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 4:59:00 PM

Francine, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 4:56:00 PM

Congrats Francine on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your chart topping win..luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 1/10/2011 4:50:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!Congrats to you!!!!!see winners page~

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/8/2011 10:56:00 AM

Very good!!!! Nice entry and I wish you the best in the contest.... luv Michael

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/8/2011 6:07:00 AM

Hi Francine. Thanks for your kind kind comment. The very best of luck in the contest with this fine write. Love the way the words work if you read it as written, starting slowly and low ,then increasing pace and volume to hit the crescendo. Fabulous. Eamon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2011 6:01:00 PM

Super one Francine to depict the piano and its magical music ... good luck in the contest.. a certain chart topper my friend.. happy weekend..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2011 5:06:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2011 3:50:00 PM

So many piano pieces do start slowly, tentatively, and then the crescendo soars to raise our spirits. An excellent crystalline that recalls so many musical compositions. Best wishes in the contest, Francine! Love, Carolyn

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/7/2011 7:56:00 AM

So this is one for the contest? It looks good.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2011 6:57:00 AM

Very nice take on the Piano Music, Francine with nice imagery. Good luck.

Constance La France

Date: 1/7/2011 6:32:00 AM

I can almost feel the crescendo building in this "fantastic" cyrstalline ~~