Piano Crystalline

the subtle notes start tentatively

....soon building to a crescendo.






for Rick's "Piano" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Way to go Francine, good to see you at the top with this 2nt place. Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's Contest! Always, Annalise
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Francine in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 5:05 PM
just like love! Nice emotion in a few words! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's contest, Francine! Always, Annalise
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 12:13 PM
This was beautiful words that deserve a 2nd.place win Francine.Thanks for your comment I've been sick and haven't been online for a few days but I'M BACK.~LUV~Teresa
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January 12, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. God Bless Phyl
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Congratulations..Sara
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Excellent crystalline Francine!congrats on your well deserved big win!-kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 5:53 AM
you pulled me in, francine! congrats for the big win in this contest!
Bagnall Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 3:59 AM
Nice choice of words - congrats !
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 9:58 PM
Congratulations, Francine. We both liked that T word! LUv, Andrea
Henderson Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 8:36 PM
could be a nice metaphore for love making here. Nice write, Charles
Richards Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Nice one Francine.....I can hear it build...note by note!!
Devonshire Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:59 PM
Francine, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your chart topping win..luv..
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January 8, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Very good!!!! Nice entry and I wish you the best in the contest.... luv Michael
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January 8, 2011 at 6:07 AM
Hi Francine. Thanks for your kind kind comment. The very best of luck in the contest with this fine write. Love the way the words work if you read it as written, starting slowly and low ,then increasing pace and volume to hit the crescendo. Fabulous. Eamon
Sweetheart Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Super one Francine to depict the piano and its magical music ... good luck in the contest.. a certain chart topper my friend.. happy weekend..with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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January 7, 2011 at 3:50 PM
So many piano pieces do start slowly, tentatively, and then the crescendo soars to raise our spirits. An excellent crystalline that recalls so many musical compositions. Best wishes in the contest, Francine! Love, Carolyn
Pettit Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 7:56 AM
So this is one for the contest? It looks good.
Mehta Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Very nice take on the Piano Music, Francine with nice imagery. Good luck.
La France Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:32 AM
I can almost feel the crescendo building in this "fantastic" cyrstalline ~~
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 10:39 PM
Francine, this is very lovely! I am wondering if I can do three of these in a series. So I am checking all the ones on here tonight to see if anyone else did theirs that way! good luck, dear. Luv, andrea
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