Piano

Porcelain keys create Passionate sonatas Pitched in dulcet notes through Prewritten preludes that Piercingly vibrate when Pianists softly press Pedals to enhance tunes

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/23/2023 10:50:00 AM

You had me at "Piano" :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2023 9:42:00 AM

Dear Empress, your smooth as silk pleiades flows like a lovely free verse and plays upon the poetic page like a soft tickling of the ivories. Ingenious use of the letter "P". Your vibrant imagery and artistry resonates so beautifully, sweet poetess. Congratulations for your brilliant win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:50:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

Maria Williams

Date: 9/22/2023 4:10:00 AM

I see that congratulations are in order, dear Inky. Well done on this gem. Love and Hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2023 11:48:00 AM

I am absolutely thrilled to acknowledge and celebrate the exquisite beauty of your piano composition, dear Iik. As I relished every melodious note that emanated from its tenor. With utmost sincerity, I extend my congratulations on your well-deserved win. Each time you emerge victorious, a surge of elation overwhelms me as well dear Ink.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:29:00 AM

Love this! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Ink :) -

Terry Miller

Date: 9/20/2023 3:09:00 AM

Lovely flow to this pleiades hard to achieve you did this brilliantly; congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2023 3:59:00 PM

I look for the unique! I like this one!

Paige Hind

Date: 9/18/2023 1:41:00 PM

I used to play... do you? This was lovely work!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2023 4:55:00 PM

Wow this one has to score high. A real gem

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/17/2023 1:46:00 PM

I love the flow of your Pleiades...it seems effortless and gentle, like music well-played on a piano. :-) Nicely done, Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/17/2023 8:11:00 AM

Dear Inky, your Pleiades flows very well when we recite it and I loved it. "Porcelain keys create passionate sonatas pitched in dulcet notes"... Aw... so well crafted. " prewritten preludes"..."that piercingly vibrate when pianists softly press"...very creative. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs... ~ Ani

The Situation

Date: 9/17/2023 6:20:00 AM

This reminded me of the petals. Gods work is never incompleat.

Michelle Morris

Date: 9/17/2023 6:04:00 AM

I love this poem! I used to play the piano and your poem resonates in my soul. Music and words are magical creations in our universe. Blessings and best wishes. :-)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 6:09:00 AM

Ah thank you my dear, now I understand why your words are so lyrical, and musical, im so grateful for your visit and sweet support thank u so much. Have a blessed weekend

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/17/2023 5:48:00 AM

Dear, Ink, Your poem is absolutely stunning! The way you incorporated the letter P to describe the various components of a piano is truly remarkable. It's as if your words effortlessly glide across the page, just like the music that emanates from a piano under the skillful hands of a masterful musician. Your extensive vocabulary only adds to the richness and beauty of your writing. A sure winner

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 6:08:00 AM

This is such a beautiful comment, so poetic and kind, you are such a ray of light on soup, poetically lifting so many souls, thank you for being so supportive always, im forever grateful

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2023 5:48:00 AM

Passionate sonatas---Prewritten preludes----I hear the sound of piano keys, Ink, through your artistic words delivering harmony. Simply beautiful!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay, i tried again. Not sure if its good enough. Appreciate your support always truly

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/17/2023 5:25:00 AM

Your poem is a music lover's feast my friend. I had a friend long ago that was a very keen pianist. But I heard about 22 years back he passed away in a car accident somewhere out West. Very well composed. A fav for me. God bless you my friend.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 6:04:00 AM

I am so sorry for your loss, that sounds tragic, perhaps your friend is now playing piano in heaven. Thank you for your kind and generous visit. Always grateful for your support

Valsa George

Date: 9/17/2023 5:15:00 AM

Wow, so beautiful ! Your poem has orignated with the same ease and flow as music flows from a piano with the dexterous touch of the digit extremities of a music maestro. Love it dear Empress. A sure win in my eyes! All the Best!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 5:26:00 AM

Awn this is so kind of you to say, thank you so very much poetic soul, i appreciate your generous and sincere feedback always

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 4:38:00 AM

Oh my Gosh.. lol.. Great use of the letter P to describe the elements of a piano.. you as a pianist must have found this one easy.. your vocabulary is always so extensive... porcelain is always a nice descriptive words... i can see the process of a pianist... i wish i had the patience to learn the piano.. nice one Ink... keep bleeding..

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 4:48:00 AM

Whateva my lil pleiades is nothing compared to your poems lol haha pianist i may be but was difficult to write Pleiades lol playing piano is easier trust me. Thank you silent one i shall bleed ink

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 9/17/2023 2:39:00 AM

Mmmm porcelain keys do create passionate sonatas.. love that!!! Piercingly vibrate when pianists soft press pedals of enchanted tunes … oh my!!! Papi!!! Damn!!! THATS IT!!! I NEED TO FIND ME A PIANIST!!!!!! This piece is gorgeously written… ok lemme go listen to a piano tune!!!! Better yet, watch them play and press on them notes hahahahaha

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 2:45:00 AM

Lolololol

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/17/2023 2:44:00 AM

What help???. What do you think I’m doin on YouTube right now ?? Helping YouTube help me Hahahahahha

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 2:41:00 AM

Hahah i know few do u need help u are hilarious lol

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/17/2023 2:06:00 AM

My gosh, what a stunning take for the Pleiades contest! You've absolutely nailed it and especially I'm in awe of how you've elaborated the mystical notes of the lovely Piano.. Your wordplay in 'P' is truly refreshing and is creating a very mesmerizing ambience.. "Porcelain keys" Ahh, so unique!!! "Pitched in dulcet notes through" Ah, yes I wanna feel those "prewritten preludes" Truly stunning.. "Pianists softly press pedals to enhance tunes" Wow.. Such a mellifluous write this is, A Fav :)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/17/2023 2:09:00 AM

Haha awwn my angelic star, i had few written, wrote on lawyer and posted this instead. Pleiades are tricky, but well, as i play piano since young i thought i should post this. Ah m so happy u think this is good enough. So grateful to have you here poetically

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/17/2023 2:08:00 AM

Wishing you the best of luck in the contest, one of the most beautiful takes, you always have a profound way of conveying such vivid imageries and emotions!!! And this royal piano has stolen my heart :)