Piano

Playful as a puppy pouncing, as a child I'd pound upon black and white planks, listening to the pitch, noticing that my Pa's voice sounded like the placement of my left hand. 9-16-23

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/25/2023 9:27:00 PM

Very creative.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/22/2023 1:05:00 PM

I have never played the piano but can imagine what it was like for you, such poignancy on that last line about your father~

Sam Scott

Date: 9/19/2023 2:47:00 AM

I am very fond of a piano, they make me happy, very much like friends do, they are good for mental health but just do your soul so much good. Clever and lovely poem :)

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 5:00:00 AM

This is a clever take on piano.. nice choice of words using the letter, P. Also a bit of lesson in being a pianist.. Nice one.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/17/2023 2:28:00 AM

This is lovely