Notes About The Poem

Dec. 20, 2025 for Nette Onclaud's Love Language Of Yuletide Poetry Contest

Topic #4 is the title

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Physical Touch

An arm around one’s shoulder lends comfort;
a hand reaching out lifts somebody up;
a big bear hug shows loved ones affection.
Hand in hand, small children walk to school.
One day, their hand gingerly will touch
that of the one for whom their fondness grows.
Fingers trace the face and stroke the body
of the darling they share sweet kisses with.
What is love without some physical touch?
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Physical Touch" write. Have a Blessed Day with your Win...
Guptar Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 11:45 PM
Congratulations, dear poetess, on your top win in this contest with a lovely poem on the diverse aspects of love , a language of its own. A thoughtful take on the prompt. Sending you the blessings of light.
Jones Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Back to say congratulations on your contest win!
Gauthier Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Sweet ~ love the different aspects you explored.
Hind Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Nice take on this!! <3
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Hello Andr3ea, I agree with you. Merry ChristmAs. Hugs. /Darlene/
Theraven Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Hello Andrea, "What is love without some physical touch?" Besides wonderful lilting strokes in a poem, perhaps some sage advice. Reminds us that, now & then, our loved ones need that connection because we hold them dear. -Richard
Buhagiar Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 10:26 AM
It is comforting, especially in our old age to feel close to a loved one.
Bayles Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 8:20 AM
Wonderful, Andrea, Love as it evolves through the years is such a part of us.
Callus Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 2:07 AM
I absolutely agree with you, Andrea! Love comes in many forms (which can be described as the languages of love) and touch undoubtedly ranks high on the list! ~ Best regards for Christmas & the new Year // paul
Kerr Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 1:44 AM
Andrea, You have composed another stellar poem. It exudes warmth and romance in a breathtaking lyrical sweep. It’s a definite contest winner. I will act on your advice with regard to Intriguing Summit Watch. Today I will post it in free verse form. It will be called Intriguing Summit Watch Part Two. Thanks for the tip, Howard
May Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:10 PM
A gentle touch shows affection. Nicely penned
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 5:52 PM
I agree...the physical touch is an important part of the 'love experience.' Nicely penned
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 1:52 PM
Ahh!! This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Yes, we as humans need the physical touch and a spiritual connection. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Thanks, Sara
Jones Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 1:34 PM
Nicely expressed! I think now it is sad that kids can’t be as affectionate as we were in schools due to perverse behavior by various predators. Some kids like I was only receiving attention from a teacher who cared and was professional and life saving. I admit to also having a perverted teacher who targeted abused kids like me. So now it is sadly frowned upon to be affectionate.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Agreed
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:52 PM
A few bad apples always spoil the barrel!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Love it! Sweetness in first love!
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Kim
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