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With my brightened lens, I watch you mystically zooming in zooming out, and my eyes focus on the shutter where a hundred gulls flap in brief moments: carefully, I seize the image, almost lost in transition as my rushed stanzas etch the language of your distinct angles. Following your trail, I chance upon a lattice of asters sprawled on pine wood grating my line of phrases: flowers posing without shame, beautiful like summer ‘s shape...and I watch you romp in the blur of rain clicking on a Kodak chrome; while my quill explodes with the burst of your animated snapshots. My dear, in this symbiotic flow where poetry and visual arts understand the hidden grandeur of the world, shall this my verse meld with your splashed landscape? .................... August Premiere Contest for Brian Strand
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Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Hi Nette, very creative and a joy to read. Congrats on your win :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Beautiful--so alive and descriptive, Nette! Congrats on your win. Janice
A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:28 PM
An exquisite descriptive write, Nette! You have a creative way with words. Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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July 9, 2016 at 4:27 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
Gazbowski Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 8:54 PM
A joy to read Nette.
Fleming Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Strangely enough both facets of this poem seem to fit exceedingly well! An enjoyable read, Nette. My warmest regards! :-) john P.s Congratulations!
Romaine Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Hey Nette, a hearty congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Beautiful writing and expression. A well deserved win! Be Blessed, Neva
A  Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 11:03 AM
Nette, Wonderful win. **SKAT**
Martin Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Wonderful! You really have an artist's vocabulary used in such a great poem.
Vaso Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Magical, a poetic journey, loved this one!
Anish Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Beautiful words here! I especially like the part where you talk about a symbiotic flow. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Callus Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Awww absolutely lovely, Nette!! I love your take on this bribery topic; different from many of the other entries. You too have been inspired by Casarah's camera and quill:) #7 ~ Hugs // paul
A   Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 1:17 PM
beautiful... good luck coming in second. Love Linda
Muideen Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:02 PM
What a great write for the contest, hope this meet with what she wanted. A wonderful bribe this is ...excellent piece............A.M.
Nunez Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:56 PM
A pure poetic bribe that is hard to resist! Way to go, Nette! PS. I took Jim the Trim out of his hiding place...huggs!
Sergi Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Hi nette: I can feel that you put your heart and soul into this poem. Beautiful! I see a winner here.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:22 AM
You shed a bit of your soul in your poetry Nette. This is exquisite! I am sure to see this at the top of the winner's list. I have to fave this one! #7
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:44 AM
wow, you REALLY know the heart of the poet to get to her. Not only is your poem a great bribe, but it stands on its own as a quality poem (which others in this contest do not do!) LIke mine, which is a pure bribe written just to Casarah! It's not even posted yet, so embarrassing what I did!!
Kapoor Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Excellent Nette dear freind. You have beautifully summarized the would be shape of Poetry and Visual Arts. Great Visualization from the angles of the Camera unto the surface of the heart, where these images form shapes into a Poem or Song. My good wishes for your contest entry dear friend. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Datu Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Poetry in motion and visual effects. Magnificent way to blend both forms of art!
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Very beautiful nette
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Nette wonderful write. Nice entry for the contest.
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