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Mornings blushed in dew replicating your jubilant smile, love-ladened cupcakes in pink flavored by your honey-dipped fingers, fragrance of your jasmine-clad hair swaying along every time you danced, exchanging exclusive looks in public to laugh at shared secrets with coffee, strumming broken strings of your guitar when we collided against the window, rambling vintage songs on deserted streets of an unknown city on our vacation, laughing out aloud when I repeated our mistakes despite your warnings, sharing anxious hugs scared to part on a journey to unbeknownst roads. Someone pause that treacherous night! When you screamed in agony and left us, gifted your baby echoing innocent cries... I miss each moment when I look at our photographs teary-eyed sitting on our abandoned bench again years later, in a world without you.. 'Retreat to our world dear friend', I pray. A ray of light shines through me, someone just called me wide-eyed in glee. Oh such a gorgeous creature she is! Reflecting everything you had once been I hope you see how adorable she is, my friend... I love and relive each moment again as I look at your charming daughter. Our yellowed photographs smile again In a world without you.. May 27, 2020 A World Without You Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Burl ~~Winner: First Place BRIAN'S CHOICE X,any form,any theme contest ~~Winner: Third Place

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Date: 6/1/2020 5:55:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your top billing. A worthy poem for all to read. ~ Sonia
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Date: 6/1/2020 10:18:00 PM
Glad you loved it Sonia. Thank you so much for your uplifting words of appreciation :)
Date: 6/1/2020 4:41:00 PM
An outstanding poem, Aditi:-) Worth rereading over and over! Heartiest congratulations on your first-place win!
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:51:00 PM
Blessed by your gracious words of appreciation Edward. Thank you so much :)
Date: 6/1/2020 3:55:00 PM
A super Congrats my friend...pure gold writing Aditi...all the best from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and wishes dear Wingster :)
Date: 6/1/2020 2:16:00 PM
My deepest congratulations on your #1 win for this sad and touching write, Aditi. And thank you for your continual support with your uplifting and thoughtful comments. Many blessings ~ John
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Date: 6/1/2020 3:02:00 PM
Thank you for encouraging me to keep writing always and for your blessed wishes and appreciation dear friend :)
Date: 6/1/2020 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" In life we only have our memories and photographs. Hugs...................
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Date: 6/1/2020 3:02:00 PM
Memories remain no matter who leaves. Thank you for your kind wishes Paula. Much love :)
Date: 5/31/2020 11:55:00 PM
Deep and touching, Aditi, my heartiest congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 6/1/2020 2:02:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and generous appreciation Jo :)
Date: 5/31/2020 11:19:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in your poignant lines, Aditi...congrats on your first place win! Hugs, Rhonda :)
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Date: 5/31/2020 11:22:00 PM
Glad you loved it Rhonda. Thank you for your kind wishes. Much love :)
Date: 5/31/2020 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Aditi, it's a great poem with stunning images of love and loss.
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Date: 5/31/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating my words and for your generous wishes Mala :) God bless you.
Date: 5/31/2020 2:42:00 PM
Deep thought Relished Bravo On Your 1st place win
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind wishes Gideon :)
Date: 5/31/2020 2:28:00 PM
Beautifully written, I found me self lost in your words. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:36:00 PM
Glad you loved my words. Thank you for paying a visit and leaving your valuable words of appreciation :)
Date: 5/31/2020 11:47:00 AM
Enchanted poem with great imagery , Aditi. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/31/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words Eve. God bless you :)
Date: 5/31/2020 9:03:00 AM
BIG congrats on yet another TOP win for you, Aditi.
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Date: 5/31/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Vijay :)
Date: 5/28/2020 9:12:00 AM
Oh, the sweetness and pain of these penned words. Congrats on your fab win.
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Date: 5/28/2020 9:36:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind uplifting words Jeanne :) Glad you loved them
Date: 5/27/2020 5:53:00 PM
Congrats my friend on your splendid win in Brian's contest. You are poetry!
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Date: 5/28/2020 12:00:00 AM
Your encouragement always leaves me with a smile on my face. Thank you so much for the appreciation Vjiay :)
Date: 5/27/2020 5:51:00 PM
Aditi, beautiful poem, well done, Can you check your soupmail, please
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Date: 5/27/2020 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your encouragement Constance. Check your soup mail. Blessings :)
Date: 5/27/2020 9:46:00 AM
Beautiful memories Aditi, I could sense the loss in your words. You have photographs but loved ones who have left us stay in our hearts forever. Tom
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Date: 5/27/2020 10:14:00 AM
They remain in memories but nothing can compensate for the loss. Thank you for your uplifting words Tom :)
Date: 5/27/2020 8:21:00 AM
This is stunning!! I love it. God bless you dear friend. Love and prayers for you always, Gina
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Date: 5/27/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thank you for your generous appreciation and blessings Regina. Much love :)

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