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Photograph Complete

Panoramic view Rock, hills, clouds, sky, lake so dark. All awaiting dawn!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 3:29:00 PM

I think you did great with your haiku, Marty. I love the last line becuase that is exactly what the photo invokes. Luv, Andrea

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/20/2010 7:08:00 AM

Very awesome, well descriptive language, extremely nice flow. Well done! Miss Cindy

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 4:44:00 AM

Reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start my day, Marty. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann (soup mail)

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/19/2010 8:27:00 PM

Nice, Haiku, Marty, I wish you good luck in Raul's "Awaiting Dawn" Contest! Peace, Audrey

David Byrne

Date: 2/19/2010 7:43:00 PM

Well crafted poem is, rock solid in it's rising, Marty has done well!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2010 7:39:00 PM

I like this very much Marty.. would be my second choice for entrance into the contest... encompasses the photo well..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2010 6:47:00 PM

A lovely picture you paint with words.. constance

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/19/2010 6:46:00 PM

Lovely words to compliment the contest photograph. assuming you will be entering the latest of Raul's Haiku contests. I think this fits the bill perfectly....thank you for your kind words today...Margaret

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2010 5:09:00 PM

A brilliant haiku, Marty! If this is for the contest, good luck. Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/19/2010 4:40:00 PM

Recomment..tnks dear Marty,i adjusted my Comma:)..I wrote Coma,Ow no,silly girl..thankyou dear:)and you must take part in contests..You do well..Im sure...You are one of the best poets here..Charma

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/19/2010 4:28:00 PM

Thanks and this looks like a winner. Best of luck. Love, Joyce

Date: 2/19/2010 3:09:00 PM

Interesting view. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/19/2010 2:38:00 PM

Beautiful painting..I bet you use fine oils..to get this beautiful picture in words..beautiful Marty..Charma