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Photograph Complete

Panoramic view
Rock, hills, clouds, sky, lake so dark.
All awaiting dawn!

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Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2010 at 3:29 PM

I think you did great with your haiku, Marty. I love the last line becuase that is exactly what the photo invokes. Luv, Andrea

Lucinda Bulger

February 20, 2010 at 7:08 AM

Very awesome, well descriptive language, extremely nice flow. Well done! Miss Cindy

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 20, 2010 at 4:44 AM

Reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start my day, Marty. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann (soup mail)

Audrey Haick

February 19, 2010 at 8:27 PM

Nice, Haiku, Marty, I wish you good luck in Raul's "Awaiting Dawn" Contest! Peace, Audrey

David Byrne

February 19, 2010 at 7:43 PM

Well crafted poem is, rock solid in it's rising, Marty has done well!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 19, 2010 at 7:39 PM

I like this very much Marty.. would be my second choice for entrance into the contest... encompasses the photo well..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Constance La France

February 19, 2010 at 6:47 PM

A lovely picture you paint with words.. constance

Margaret Foster

February 19, 2010 at 6:46 PM

Lovely words to compliment the contest photograph. assuming you will be entering the latest of Raul's Haiku contests. I think this fits the bill perfectly....thank you for your kind words today...Margaret

Carolyn Devonshire

February 19, 2010 at 5:09 PM

A brilliant haiku, Marty! If this is for the contest, good luck. Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

February 19, 2010 at 4:40 PM

Recomment..tnks dear Marty,i adjusted my Comma:)..I wrote Coma,Ow no,silly girl..thankyou dear:)and you must take part in contests..You do well..Im sure...You are one of the best poets here..Charma