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Photograf of the Storm

I'm on the beach and this afternoon two storms collided. actually three, if we count my own inner tempest, watching in amazement the titanic fight of the elements. the rain fell in columns flooding everything in a few moments. the wind did the rest, knocking down trees, roofs and walls made of cement. I escaped scared but unharmed, now I'm ready to narrate with respect the gigantic fury that caused so much torment.

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Date: 3/17/2022 6:12:00 PM
Excellent work, my friend. I particularly like the subtle rhymes, which I am sure were intended. They help to carry the flow of the poem from point A to point B. The story is all here, well-told, and yet leaving plenty of room for a sequel, "now I'm ready to narrate...."
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Marco Chies
Date: 3/20/2022 5:27:00 PM
Your words are always encouraging and positive, thank you very much my good friend.

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