Phony Facade

They protest to not be a drama queen
but just can't wait to jump into the scene
Pretending to be a friend
Verbal daggers they extend
Their true colors are now vibrantly seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 17, 2024 at 7:25 AM
I've encountered one or two, I keep quiet and let them stew, I play their game, rather than blame and shame, then leave em at the end of the queue.
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November 17, 2024 at 8:28 AM
Have a lovely day Tania. Xx
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November 17, 2024 at 8:12 AM
John, a good one.
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June 11, 2023 at 10:02 AM
- False facade and lies are the worst thing I know, Tania - Excellent written - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... well deserved :) - hugs
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June 11, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs.
Tor Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 10:59 PM
You captured them in their real self. Congratulations Tania for receiving POTD Honors...
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June 11, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Michael, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Congrats on your POTD.
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June 11, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Victor, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Excellent expose of the phonies, Tania! Congrats on POTD! Cheers, Gershon
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June 11, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Gershon, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Tania. Limerick is a great form to express wise thoughts in a concise form."Verbal daggers" brilliant metaphor. BW ~ Mala
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Mala, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 2:59 PM
Pointed, potent, perfect poem! Congratulations on POTD Tania! Tucking this one in my faves drawer ~xomo
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:19 PM
Mo, thank you, nice to see you on PS again!
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Good verse. Congratulations on POTD
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Eve, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Tania. Well spoken. A friend's betrayal is indeed a devastating experience, one that you have so perfectly articulated through your metaphor and imagery. Blessings.
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Sam, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on PoTD, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Andrea, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Tania..love this! Best wishes and congratulations on your POTD. It takes me awhile to distinguish friend from foe..it’s easy here to be phony… That’s very sad. A favorite and marked as such. Panagiota Gullible Pangie
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Pangie, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 10:26 AM
By belated POTD. What a wonderful limerick.
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Victor, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 9:49 AM
"Phony Facade" better than "two-faced"? Congrats on POTD, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Jim, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Two of my best buds with a poem of the day back to back! It’s a happy Saturday! Congratulations, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Lin, thank you.
Lane Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:11 AM
lol David. I'll have a trophy made for you to keep, and one for Tania. Maybe three in a row for another friend tomorrow. ;-)
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June 10, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Its only on loan!
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June 10, 2023 at 4:40 AM
Tania, congratulations on your POTD honors!! Sending continued success and happiness your way!!!
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 4:44 AM
Mike, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 2:34 AM
I sense perceived injury … great Limerick, Tania, congratulations on POTD
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:55 AM
US, thank you.
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 1:56 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on POTD, you send out a powerful message. Hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Jan, thank you, a pleasant surprise.
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June 10, 2023 at 1:32 AM
Excellent Limerick Tania! One with real meaning and biting truth, it really is deplorable behaviour to falsely befriend an individual only to attack them, but it happens here pretty regularly, they really need to get a life, congratulations on POTD, I’m green with envy did you steal it from me while I slept, oops my true colours are showing lol, cheers David
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June 10, 2023 at 7:15 AM
David, your true colors do not include the green-eyed monster of jealousy like the one who throws daggers.
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 5:54 AM
yeah the daggers are out (covertly) in one of their latest efforts but I wont reciprocate but you need to read between the lines as it will go over the head of many
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June 10, 2023 at 4:15 AM
I understand Jan, I do try read between the lines, but a lot goes over my head, sometimes I can only see it when it’s pointed out to me, typical man! Cheers David
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June 10, 2023 at 3:57 AM
David, love your humor, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 1:57 AM
Folk need to read between the lines and the lies David. Hugs jan xx
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June 10, 2023 at 12:37 AM
Congratulations Tania on POTD!! Debx
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June 10, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Deb, thank you.
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June 10, 2023 at 12:35 AM
Those sort best avoided Tania, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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June 10, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Tom, thank you.
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June 9, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Yep!! Some people are like that which is sad. I enjoyed reading your work today. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Sara, thank you and you're welcome.
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June 9, 2023 at 10:25 AM
You have always defended your friends Tania. I’m making this a favorite too.
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June 9, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Mark, thank you.
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June 9, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Good morning, Tania. Those verbal daggers are like sticks and stones that are thrown, but hurled from the pen of a pretender, they don’t hurt me, only her reputation. Jan, Sorry the mudslinger lied about you just because you are my friend. Tania , you may be her next target but I am truly grateful to have you and Jan as loyal friends. I’m faving this one.
Lane Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Consider the source, Tania. Nothing a little Tide can't fix.
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Lin, thank you again, those daggers have also been directed at me as well, the mudslinger can keep slinging, I wash up nicely!
Lane Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:36 AM
I remember you telling me about it and others.
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 2:01 AM
he made my life a misery and I gave up writing for a week but lovely friends encouraged me to stay strong and write on.
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 2:00 AM
Gee Lin I nearly left in my first month on soup as a guy was so jealous of my popularity with my 'poop poems' over his perfectly penned creations which few read or understood:-(
Lane Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 6:11 PM
You deserve your place of honor on this site, Jan. You've had more than your share of problems with bullies and trolls. None of which were your fault, and you're still here. Tania and I are with you.
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June 9, 2023 at 11:25 AM
our friendship is precious Lin and you and Tania have supported me so much during my absence from soup. the welcome back I have received (on the whole) has been nothing but positive and have spurred me on to continue writing
Kitchin Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Lin, thank you.
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Bravo Tania, for someone who was going to let the subject drop and work on their biography they certainly are not true to their word but constantly claim they dont lie. I am saddened they have stooped so low and written a poem aimed at me and another souper . I will keep penning my poop and will never be bullied by anyone here. Hugs Jan x
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June 9, 2023 at 3:40 AM
Jan, thank you, hugs.
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