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Phone Rings

Telephone wire
line of birds pruning ...
Phone rings they all fall downnnnnnn

funnyhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 10:04:00 PM

Seren, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/19/2012 10:12:00 PM

Lol did I wow thats good to know....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2012 6:46:00 PM

just saw the note you wrote under my last comment to this one. funny to think of those birds and their reactions. Congrats on your win with this.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 7:04:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for commenting....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/18/2012 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Sassy love. There is life without soup then, even if it is a poorly boy lol. He woke up but is settling down to sleep again now I have cooled him down a bit xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2012 11:12:00 AM

oh, this makes quite a funny picture . COOL one, seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/16/2012 12:37:00 PM

thanks Andrea, I often wondered if they have any affect to their feet with all the calls made....Seren

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2012 3:33:00 AM

great visual effect Seren .. thankxx so much for my win in Fishing luv .. so appreciate the honor luv ..

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/16/2012 12:37:00 PM

thats my pleasure Linda, have to think of a cookie one next lol...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/15/2012 8:34:00 AM

wow the vibrations, a lot to think about here..

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/15/2012 9:50:00 AM

lol good vibrations....Seren

The Situation

Date: 12/14/2012 1:37:00 PM

Just wondering if your old enough to know what a party line was.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 2:23:00 PM

No not old enough, but i do know what they are, when 2 households share same line to exchange.....Seren

Rollo West

Date: 12/14/2012 12:19:00 PM

Really good Seren, got a laugh out of this one. Rollo

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 12:51:00 PM

Thats good Rollo thats why I try to write funny ones to bring a smile to someone....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2012 5:56:00 AM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest..I have often wondered if the birds can feel words as they pass along the wires...Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/14/2012 2:56:00 AM

Ha ha don't forget ellipsis xx

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