Phone Rings

Telephone wire
line of birds pruning ...
Phone rings they all fall downnnnnnn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 19, 2012 at 10:04 PM
Seren, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
Roberts Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Lol did I wow thats good to know....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 6:46 PM
just saw the note you wrote under my last comment to this one. funny to think of those birds and their reactions. Congrats on your win with this.
Roberts Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 7:04 PM
Thanks Andrea for commenting....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Sassy love. There is life without soup then, even if it is a poorly boy lol. He woke up but is settling down to sleep again now I have cooled him down a bit xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 11:12 AM
oh, this makes quite a funny picture . COOL one, seren.
Roberts Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 12:37 PM
thanks Andrea, I often wondered if they have any affect to their feet with all the calls made....Seren
Sweetheart Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 3:33 AM
great visual effect Seren .. thankxx so much for my win in Fishing luv .. so appreciate the honor luv ..
Roberts Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 12:37 PM
thats my pleasure Linda, have to think of a cookie one next lol...Seren
Horsman Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 8:34 AM
wow the vibrations, a lot to think about here..
Roberts Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 9:50 AM
lol good vibrations....Seren
Situation Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Just wondering if your old enough to know what a party line was.
Roberts Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 2:23 PM
No not old enough, but i do know what they are, when 2 households share same line to exchange.....Seren
West Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Really good Seren, got a laugh out of this one. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 12:51 PM
Thats good Rollo thats why I try to write funny ones to bring a smile to someone....Seren
Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest..I have often wondered if the birds can feel words as they pass along the wires...Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 2:56 AM
Ha ha don't forget ellipsis xx
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