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This is a message from the Department of cause and effect Please pay attention From this moment on Everything is in your hands Your thoughts are becoming the future Don't screw it up Or we may have to start all over again If it isn't already to late.

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Date: 7/23/2013 10:52:00 PM
never to late...:-) PD
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 9/14/2016 9:34:00 PM
of course it isn't.poetic license for effect.
Date: 7/9/2013 5:37:00 PM
The effect of your poem has caused me to think...especially to think of future generations whose thoughts do become the future. Appreciate the form, and the sophisticated message stated in a relatively straightforward way.
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Date: 7/6/2013 7:09:00 AM
Michael, You have it exactly! Couldn't have said it any better. The title is great too and so appropriate. I will be reading your work on a regular basis. Thank you for your very kind comments.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/6/2013 5:13:00 PM
thanks Duke
Date: 6/27/2013 6:02:00 PM
"Your thoughts are becoming the future" Hi Michael, I love this. This is something to think about
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 9/14/2016 9:39:00 PM
If people think about thoughts becoming things my work is done. Thank You Christine.
Date: 6/27/2013 6:05:00 AM
Dynamite! I love the Department of cause and effect... Jack
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/6/2013 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Jack
Date: 6/26/2013 11:05:00 PM
mystery and humor ,,,, good write Michael ;}
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