Michael Ainsley Poet Free verse

Phone Message

This is a message from the Department of cause and effect                                                          Please pay attention                                                                                                                                                  From this moment on                                                                                                                       Everything is in your hands                                                                                                             Your thoughts are becoming the future                                                                                                             Don't screw it up                                                                                                                                Or we may have to start all over again                                                                                              If it isn't already to late.

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Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2013 at 10:52 PM never to late...:-) PD Michael Ainsley September 14, 2016 at 9:34 PM of course it isn't.poetic license for effect.

Gail Debole July 9, 2013 at 5:37 PM The effect of your poem has caused me to think...especially to think of future generations whose thoughts do become the future. Appreciate the form, and the sophisticated message stated in a relatively straightforward way.

Duke Beaufort July 6, 2013 at 7:09 AM Michael, You have it exactly! Couldn't have said it any better. The title is great too and so appropriate. I will be reading your work on a regular basis. Thank you for your very kind comments. Michael Ainsley July 6, 2013 at 5:13 PM thanks Duke

Christine Phillips June 27, 2013 at 6:02 PM "Your thoughts are becoming the future" Hi Michael, I love this. This is something to think about Michael Ainsley September 14, 2016 at 9:39 PM If people think about thoughts becoming things my work is done. Thank You Christine.

Jack Jordan June 27, 2013 at 6:05 AM Dynamite! I love the Department of cause and effect... Jack Michael Ainsley July 6, 2013 at 5:14 PM Thanks Jack

Debbie Duncan June 26, 2013 at 11:05 PM mystery and humor ,,,, good write Michael ;}