Phoenix Defrosted

Phoenix Defrosted

Given by the Sun God the good of the moon and some lucky stars
he sits full of fortune love and still in miraculous amazement under 
the bright rays of southern soil soaking unbelievable kindness and
mutual compassion granted by soul searching and Higher Power

Love had been made before from a different fabric and the colours had 
quietly faded to screaming silence frozen into glaciers’ clefts of darkness
Chances lead the way and permafrost was not forever when the mask
came off with all its distortions mangled ice melting into novel beginnings

It took him searching of feeling thought desire and some meeting of minds
revisiting gently rigorously what had appeared to be the only prospect
one of soundless demise and shattering unfeasible stagnant arrest in the
prison of domination wilted marred marriage depression and torment

Agony struck and it however ignited a passion unknown a mating and union 
conjoined at hips and above for always and in all ways a heartfelt dance with 
the Universe high and below inside and within a mango grooved delta of 
Venus hot soothing lava engulfing new lovers’ poetic trees in poetry’s motion

Considering failure in cause and success in effect of landslides misfortune
bad luck and bad choices he is fortuitously graced now to thank destiny
constellation of karma kismet pure hard worked for chances where one thing 
leads to another when the ashes are reshuffled and second fire is sublime

06th September 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/7/2016 4:27:00 PM
...."Considering failure in cause and success in effect of landslides misfortune bad luck and bad choices he is fortuitously graced now to thank destiny"- best two lines in the poem, congrats on your placement friend :)-luloo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/8/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you lulloo. It did not take me to write that, but a long time to learn. Lots of sunny wishes from South Africa.
Date: 9/7/2016 3:57:00 PM
Beautiful
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/8/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/7/2016 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations Kai on the placement of the contest.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/8/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much for your time taken Nayda in sponsoring contests. They are always a good trigger.
Date: 9/7/2016 11:51:00 AM
I love it all, and especially this: "Agony struck and it however ignited a passion unknown a mating and union conjoined at hips and above for always and in all ways a heartfelt dance with the Universe high and below inside and within a mango grooved delta of Venus hot soothing lava engulfing new lovers’ poetic trees in poetry’s motion" Thank you! Darren.
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:18:00 AM
Man can you write...a special talent my friend...enjoyed...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/6/2016 3:58:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/7/2016 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I appreciate that. Kai
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