Phoenix

Oh banish from the dim lit moor
barren windswept cold and more
the untamed nagging beast and boor

Oh darkened sky above the fire
smoke rising from the pricey pyre
signals where my hopes retire

Oh twisted wooden frame remains
wreckage of some airborne gains
lock my airfield gate in chains

Oh welcome summer shifts of breeze
warmer winds from warmer seas
shafts of sun to ashes tease

Oh see it rise, oh spark of life
bird of wonder born of strife
free to wander, free to fly!

Oh transformation of the moor,
dappled by the sun and more:
no untamed beast, no nagging boor.

-Dedicated to all the pilots who, in practice or competition, have lost a plane this year, or in years past. Precision aerobatic planes represent a significant investment of time and money.  Their courage to rebuild and compete again was an inspiration to me.  Here's to renewed hope, rising from the ashes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/12/2019 9:58:00 PM
Good job.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/12/2019 10:03:00 PM
Thanks, Miranda.
Date: 12/4/2019 12:34:00 AM
Wonderful tribute! I have always thought flying a plane would be fun. You make it sound doable.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/4/2019 12:50:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Certain aspects are fun, but learning aerobatics is a lot of work, and definitely a physical workout for the pilot. Whether flying full scale or model planes, checklists are essential to prevent injury or death. Like life, it's a mixed bag.
Date: 11/19/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thank you. Thanks for reading.
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Date: 11/19/2019 2:06:00 AM
Hi Greg a nice tribute here. Thanks for sharing
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