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Let me tell you about my fear . . . I keep having the same horrible, fearful dream each night- It is snowing and I am driving my old car; and I have miles to go, when my car slides and crashes . . . I see a house not far, dim against the sky, reaching it, I knock on the door then I open it; it is pitch black inside and seems to be abandoned, (I groan in my sleep) . . . Ahead are stairs that lead up, at the top are dark hallways; with faded wallpaper and no windows but doors, and each door I try opening- is locked; (were there not windows on the outside?) I am scared of the darkness and quiet, soon, I am lost in a maze of dark hallways. Running down halls that go nowhere- each a dead end; no door opens, and the hallways just go on and on . . . I am lost in this house, and I am so tired- tired; I fall on a dirty, threadbare rug and I sleep, waking in the morn' in my bed with the lights on. _____________________ September 16, 2017 Narrative/PHOBIA: Fear Of Old Houses Copyright Protected, ID 940165 Written for the contest, Fear II sponsor, Debbie Guzzi Sixth Place

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Date: 9/27/2017 8:54:00 AM
A wonderful, well-written narrative poem about your fear, Constance. You made your nightmare come to life. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short winner's list. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:30:00 PM
Constance, your WINNING poem really captures the terror of being trapped in a nightmare! Janice
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations, BW on your placement with this really fearsome poem.
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Date: 9/26/2017 8:41:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome! A great write deserving of the win.
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Date: 9/17/2017 7:05:00 AM
I love your write! Yes, we can be fearful of those old houses. Love your commentary...i groan in my sleep, were there not windows on the outside. Bravo! gL in contest!
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:48:00 AM
Yes, that would be a frightening dream, but it is one that I could see happening over and over again! This poem reminded me of some of my Halloween poems, the scary houses where witches live with their animated skeletons! At least you weren't being chased within the house...now that would scare me to death, being chased by something within a house with only doors (that are all locked) and no way out! I really enjoyed reading you awesome poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2017 6:47:00 AM
Russell thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment
Date: 9/16/2017 2:00:00 PM
very creepy imagery I'm glad it's just a dream Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 9/16/2017 5:26:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit, I do hate old dark places

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