Philosophy 1

Philosophy 1

Our side-by-side desks were acquainted. Sadly, we were not.
Sassy and blond, Tammy Sue was a philosophy freak.
Afforded by Macon, Georgia she idolized Julia Kristeva.
I idolized Tammy Sue.
Near the end of the semester at NYU, desperately intrepid,
I dragged my suddenly torpid legs towards Tammy Sue 
and blurted out a line I had just read; 
“Metaphor fashions a doorway from language, leading out”.
Tammy Sue regarded me.
Cringing, I anticipated painful rejection.
“Oh, Eric” emerged from her precious lips.
“That is so CLEVER!”
she drawled; drawing out her words to last, it seemed, forever.
“We” lasted two months; then the magic of that line wore off.
“Eric, you’re so sweet” she began.
Unhinged by the dagger in my heart, 
I heard only her finale,
the Lord Tennyson classic,
“I am a part of all that I have met”;
then a kiss and goodbye;
a fitting close for philosophy class.
Whenever I repeat those words I feel her part in me.
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March 4, 2012 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Jay. Love, Carol
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March 3, 2012 at 9:43 PM
JAY, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN Olajide Adelana CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*
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March 3, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Jay congrats on your win..David
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March 3, 2012 at 5:56 PM
David, thanks. You help make this all happen. Jay
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March 3, 2012 at 12:28 PM
A wonderful story you have penned here Jay.Congrats on your win.
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March 3, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Kash, I enjoy your pieces. Thanks for the kind word. Jay
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February 23, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jay. Hope you will find lots of inspiration that you may continue to write your poetry. Love, Carol
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