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Philippines Pride

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three stars and a sun

                  heroes shed blood for freedom

                       waves proudly in sky.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 5:52:00 PM

AIYAH, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/28/2016 8:57:00 AM

What an amazing work you've done Aiyah! This deserves a thousand views! (BTW, I'm a proud filipino here :) - HANS

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2015 8:42:00 PM

Aiyah, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem is an honor to read. Love LINDA

Len Gasun

Date: 7/26/2015 10:23:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate you heartily on this precious gem of yours and the shining win my very dear friend, Aiyah! Hugs and cheers! Mabuhay Ang Pilipinas! Stopping by also to say my Warmest Hello and Hope you've a Blessed weekend! love you, Leonora

Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2015 4:07:00 PM

Love your flag poem, Aiyah! Pinoy pride at its best:) Congratulations!!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 5:42:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Aiyah:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/24/2015 12:33:00 PM

Wow! So proud to see our flag you carry up there, Aiyah. You nailed it! Yes, Go Pinas! hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/24/2015 3:39:00 AM

Aiyah!!! proud of you!!! yey!!! :D! beauty and brains!!! :D hugsss!~Olive ELoisa

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/23/2015 10:21:00 PM

Love the feeling of pride as it waves in the sky,, well done haiku Aiyah n congrats on ur first place win!

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/23/2015 8:40:00 PM

Lovely, I'd give it 4 stars. Congrats on your win!

Skat A

Date: 7/23/2015 8:06:00 PM

SO FANTASTIC....... AIYAH, Congratulations, :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS, It's an honor to have your haiku in my contest. Forever **SKAT**

Len Gasun

Date: 7/21/2015 10:35:00 AM

This is an excellent senryu to honor our state's flag my very dear friend, Aiyah. I love it soo much. You did it Very well. I'm so delighted to read it tonight. I wrote a poem as well to honor our flag. At first, I was thinking of Haiku or senryu, but then I found it quite hard so, I came up with an idea of using just 3- lines verse. I don't know if it's ok. By the way, how are you? Hope you're doing well. I miss you! Sending hugs and smiles from me! love lots, Leonora

Christopher Leonidas

Date: 7/20/2015 12:04:00 PM

This Poem is so beautiful.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/19/2015 4:53:00 AM

An excellent and wisely write, this piece read like a winner to me.........A.M.

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2015 11:43:00 AM

Fine tribute Aya, can't wait to go back this August, love your country so much, hugs//James xx

Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/18/2015 7:58:00 PM

thanks James :) WOW!! you're coming back in August?.. that's cool.. hope I can see you ,too... :))

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/17/2015 6:24:00 AM

Beautiful, Aiyah. You did us proud. Goodluck!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/18/2015 8:03:00 PM

thanks dear !! ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2015 7:02:00 PM

Aiyah, this is nice. A suggestion for the last line is to say "proudly" Also that will give you five syllables. And if you said three stars and A sun, you will have five syllables on the top as well!! Good luck in the contest.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/16/2015 9:40:00 PM

Thanks Andie.. i thought it would not meet the requirements,,, but thanks I'll follow your advice .:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 4:54:00 PM

fly the flag for freedom - a lovely write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lara Wash

Date: 7/16/2015 11:39:00 AM

Flags can represent so many things, but nothing is greater than when freedom rings. Thanks for sharing Aiyah