Phil

Soon after I retired, so did Phil
We built model planes; had time to kill
Phil’s got his plane in the sky
He got dizzy, don’t know why
The plane crashed when Phil fell off the hill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 12:27 PM
oh, that poor Phil! This was a cute limerick.
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