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Phew

bad halitosis
he should visit the dentist
I dream of fresh air

24th December 2105

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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December 29, 2015 at 7:42 PM

hahhahahaha!

December 29, 2015 at 7:43 PM

:-) hee hee:-)See what you have missed being away so long Kim!:-) hugs Jan xx

December 27, 2015 at 7:10 AM

LOL.... This is so true and funny u really made me laugh , u have no idea how many people I've met who's exactly like this... Happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia.

December 27, 2015 at 9:59 AM

LOL Dalia you just have to hope they don't get too close lol:-) hugs Jan xx

December 26, 2015 at 6:30 PM

Wonderful, this is a very good one!

December 26, 2015 at 6:31 PM

Just a fun write Eve - or maybe not so fun for me at the time but I got a poem from the experience lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

December 25, 2015 at 3:48 PM

hahaha

December 25, 2015 at 3:59 PM

hee hee:-) hugs Jan xx

December 25, 2015 at 12:51 PM

Good one, Jan; in the meantime keep your distance, or use a peg:) Hugs // paul

December 25, 2015 at 12:53 PM

Lol it can be very difficult to avoid sometimes Paul lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 24, 2015 at 5:53 AM

Awful! He, definitely should! Hope didn't happen to you dear Jean!

December 24, 2015 at 3:45 PM

Yes quite recently lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

December 23, 2015 at 10:30 PM

Jan, you are so good at these funny writes, you made me smile because oh yes, I have met people like that, phew !!

December 24, 2015 at 3:23 AM

This was so so real BW lol:-) hugs Jan xx

December 23, 2015 at 7:18 PM

LOL Hilarious, that looks a bit like someone.

December 23, 2015 at 7:19 PM

LOl I wrote this after a recent bad experience lol:-) hugs jan xx

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