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Phew!!!

BAR so near, ajar, in sight
TAR sky beckons me tonight
CAR has broken tail light
SCAR heart beats right
STAR unblinking bright
SOAR spirit, soul’s delight
SOAK I, in joy, it’s alright

cheer uprhyme

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2024 11:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/30/2024 6:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I appreciate your support, means so much to me friend. New year blessings & cheers.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/28/2024 2:03:00 PM

Your poem brought smiles, Thriveni. Well done! :)

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/28/2024 7:24:00 PM

Ha, thank you so much. I am glad you liked it dear poet. your words means so much to me. Cheers!!!

Gary Radice

Date: 12/15/2024 1:32:00 AM

Hi thriveni I know this is for the word challenge poetry contest but… For some reason I can’t get The Sound Of Music out of my head when I read / sing this……”that will bring us back to Bar”.. (Do Re Mi) :) All the best. Cheers - Gary

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/15/2024 4:30:00 AM

haha, thank you so much for chugging so far to my page with kindness and pleasant comments. You bring joy, thank you for the blessings. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2024 12:39:00 PM

Was this for the word morph challenge? Looks like you got it. I had to search online how to do it. It's a bit difficult!!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/11/2024 9:27:00 PM

Yes it is dear poet. challenging. I have tried, was not sure of adding a letter. but, it is a good exercise. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet friend. Cheers.