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Phenomenon

When the thunder roars from the branches of flora all the birds flutter

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Date: 1/26/2022 11:46:00 AM

Hello Alaka, When the thunder roars all the birds are quiet. Until the storm is over then they begin to peep. Salute Darlene x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2022 11:51:00 AM

Hello Alaka, oh, they fly away! Well that makes sense. I wonder where they fly to. Just wondering. Salute Darlene x

Alkas Poetry
Date: 1/26/2022 2:16:00 PM

No, they fly away scared i Saw It... that IS why o wrote it salute, alkas

Date: 1/26/2022 9:19:00 AM

very nice...the lines blend seamlessly and still maintain the subtle shift(whatever it's called) of the haiku.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 1/26/2022 10:27:00 AM

SO NICE COMMENT DEAR jOHN, GOD BLESS YOU SALUTE ALKAS