Notes About The Poem

Phenomena

as if by magic,
 night transforms to wonderland.
 stars fallen from sky;
 fireflies swarm by the thousands.
children chase with eyes, transfixed.


Firefly Tanka Poetry Contest
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Date written: 03/12/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:13 PM
Your tanka is one of my favorites and I love that picture you put with it. Big congrats.
Ibeh Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Gibson Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 12:32 PM
Love this imagery and your video adds so much. Congratulations.
Ibeh Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much, Faye:-)
Sands Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 3:44 PM
Beautifully written Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 4:32 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)
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