Phantasmagoric Haze of Love

“I would rather spend one lifetime with you than face all the ages of this world alone.”
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I want to love you—all of you.
To trace each scar on your skin,
Caress them with my fingertips,
And kiss away your pain.

I want to love you wholly—
At your best, and your most broken.
Till every star falls from the velvet sky...
And even after that,
I’d still find my way back to you.

I want to submerge in
the melancholic hues of your poetry.
When we leave this world behind,
through Purgatory’s phantasmagoric haze,
My love for you will still remain.
For I would choose you, over and over again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Mendoza Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 4:48 PM
Uh hello, I'm Jacqueline R. Mendoza, a Filipino-American. For some reason I lost my like to writing poetry and your poem gave me a push to write again, I'd like to thank you for that. ~Jacqueline (Jac)
Jama Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 5:32 PM
Thank you for sharing that. I’m deeply touched that my poem helped rekindle your love for writing. Wishing you all the inspiration as you return to your poetic voice—can’t wait to see what you create.
Empress Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Sis you sound like one of my favorite poets, pablo neruda, how he writes romance is truly breathtaking! And this i feel is so sincere so straightforward and so soulfully moving! Love that is unconditional youv expressed here in such a seamless and touching manner! Pleasure reading this gem! Best wishes! A new fave for me! Sending you light! Always
Jama Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:42 AM
Truly honored by your words, being compared to Neruda means the world. So glad the piece spoke to you. Thank you for the love and light—sending it right back.
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