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May. 17-2024
A- Type of Forms Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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Pets are Angels

"God sends pets without wings so no one will suspect they are angels ..."  Unkown

 
Pets are Angels in disguise
Endearing was my canine companion
There was no other pet in my life dearer than my dog
Seated close, sometimes he would curl up at my side.

Amiably he would lay his head in my lap and sleep,
Ready to wake up at the slightest sound,
Ever alert guarding our home from rodents and rowdies.

A wild roamer was my cute tawny dachshund.
Never was he in chains to be hauled like cattle.
Gave us company as we took our evening rounds. 
Endearingly he would rub his body on our knees,
Licking our feet and arms in deep affection.
So full of mischief, playfully he capered and hopped.

I have never felt a love so deep to any other as to him.
Nor had a bereavement more intense than the one at his departure.
  
Death claimed him before we could anticipate.
Inseparable was he from our home and our children.
Speechless I stand when memories churn within
Grew up as a member of the family and an abiding companion. 
Unable to break the bond, he clings to our hearts.
In haunting thoughts of him, we still get choked.
Sacred memories of him are forever enshrined within.
Eternal bliss and sweet rest be granted unto him!
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La France Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, I love the image too, Constance
Guptar Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Valsa, my hearty congratulations on your top win in this poetry contest with a marvellous acrostic poem on your companion who has quitted you. Every verse of the poem reminds me of my German Shepherd who has recently quitted my family for good as he qualified for all the attributes you have put through. Will keep the poem in memory of the one who was our joy for some 11 years.
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:40 PM
sorry for your loss! what a sweet best friend to remember :) pets are like angels :D
McBride  Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Love it, what a blessing to read, how much joy and love these pets bring us, I have one of these as well, : ). They know these feet are made for digging holes : ). This, Love placed within from God, how much more would God love to use us : )
Empress Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 12:27 AM
Awwn sweet valsa this is so beautiful and soulful how youv written this acrostic! I love the depth of what youv conveyed here and how well youv woven this ensuring every line flows well! Its beyond impeccable and so touching! I love how youv described your experience with your pet and also how losing them feel. “ Grew up as a member of the family and an abiding companion. Unable to break the bond, he clings to our hearts. In haunting thoughts of him, we still get choked.” i feel you! Sigh! You have such a flawless way of expressing emotions and this one here is just so meaningful! A fave it is for me! And best wishes for the contest
Poet Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 7:05 PM
Dear Valsa, an exquisite poetry that explores the unique connection between yourself and your cherished canine companion, depicting canines as concealed angels and underscoring the intense affection and grief that accompanies the loss of a loving pet. You adeptly employ a range of poetic tropes to effectively communicate the feelings and experiences associated with your relationship with your dog, so greatly enhancing the inspiring quality of this Acrostic.Best wishes with the contest, Warm hugs
Bartley Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 4:45 PM
He's so cute. Thanks for sharing.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 12:01 PM
Your "Pets are Angels" is a wonderful Acrostic write/fun picture. Love It.. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........
Narain Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Pets are like family members. Their love is so deep that their death leaves a permanent scar in the hearts of the family. Nice poem.
Kendrick Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 8:44 AM
I agree, Valsa, our pets are so special no matter their personalities. I appreciate you sharing with us about your love of your pet and how the loss made you feel. One year I lost our cat and two Chihuahuas. The cat was very old, but our female Chihuahua should have lived to be twenty years old or close to that number. She had a heart defect which shortened her years and it really hurt when she passed. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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