Petrichor

"Petrichor "
Two minds have made an entrance magnetic bodies electric minions babble it’s just wasted white noise sandpaper against back stories hit The Wall of Wasted Time He’s read most between the lines He’s all hard hot and cool unruffled piercing eagle eyes forever on the hunt for willing prey She’s incognito in disguise seeking a challenge amongst the spoilt and unsoiled green-eyed fray the two watch in studied silence like heat seeking missiles they will find each other poles apart opposites light and dark fascinated they are each other’s mark the ozone is now charged the crowd dissolves invisible all their faces unread their lips unheard their madding mob words whispered all graceless passionless empty pages time departs the fuse is lit Two minds’ eyes connect both burning id reflect the moment before they met neurons travelling at lightning speed through pulse to fingertips reach out towards each other’s mortal form to touch the cerebral net then later find fingers reading skin like braille and thirst to drink from reigning lips the moment before the welcome storm hits hips to taste the salt in the cumulonimbus bursting blue feral hollows of their naked terraform the Two minds like absent gods high and lost in each other’s ocean bent and tossed live their story tattooed at the place where bodies leave clean sheets and souls connect electric bodies ignite La Petite Mort wave after wave their drowning moans ecstatically deplore their final becalmed silence approaching the sweet mercy of Petrichor (LadyLabyrinth/2018)
https://youtu.be/5hFCZ1tzWR0 "Body Electric"/Del Ray "I sing the body electric, The armies of those I love engirth me and I engirth them, They will not let me off till I go with them, respond to them, And discorrupt them, and charge them full with the charge of the soul" I Sing the Body Electric, Walt Whitman (American Poet, May 31,1819 – March 26, 1892) "The love of the body of man or woman balks account, the body itself balks account, That of the male is perfect, and that of the female is perfect." I Sing the Body Electric, Walt Whitman

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Date: 1/13/2020 5:44:00 AM
Truly exceptional poetry my friend. Such depth of romantic fever and imagination awes me. A very beautiful creation that speaks of the sexual delights that love can bring and the mental aspect of life,love and carnal desires. A wonderfully deeeeeeep and hot romantic offering. Another fav for me...
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:10:00 PM
Simply beautiful :))
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Date: 12/21/2018 8:14:00 PM
"Far from the madding crowd's ignoble strife their sober wishes never learn'd to stray; Along the cool sequester'd vale of life they kept the noiseless tenor of their way."
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Date: 12/21/2018 8:17:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7JSsVRHuDI
Date: 12/21/2018 11:36:00 AM
"I knew that I had come face to face with someone whose mere personality was so fascinating that, if I allowed it to do so, it would absorb my whole nature, my whole soul, my very art itself." Oscar Wilde
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:12:00 AM
"His sudden mad love for Sibyl Vane was a psychological phenomenon of no small interest. There was no doubt that curiosity had much to do with it, curiosity and the desire for new experiences; yet it was not a simple but rather a very complex passion." Oscar Wilde
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:36:00 AM
"I love Sibyl Vane. I want to place her on a pedestal of gold, and to see the world worship the woman who is mine." Oscar Wilde
Date: 12/21/2018 11:08:00 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walt_Whitman
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:31:00 AM
https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/3565.Oscar_Wilde
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:18:00 AM
https://lithub.com/when-wilde-met-whitman/
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:18:00 AM
https://www.sfgate.com/books/article/Decoding-Walt-Whitman-s-Homoerotic-Writings-2828117.php
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/21/2018 11:10:00 AM
"I write because it gives me the greatest possible artistic pleasure to write. If my work pleases the few I am gratified. As for the mob, I have no desire to be a popular novelist. It is far too easy." Oscar Wilde
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/21/2018 11:09:00 AM
"Women, as some witty Frenchman once put it, inspire us with the desire to do masterpieces and always prevent us from carrying them out." Oscar Wilde
Date: 12/21/2018 3:09:00 AM
"Petrichor is the earthy scent produced when rain falls on dry soil. The word is constructed from Greek petra, meaning "stone", and ichor, the fluid that flows in the veins of the gods in Greek mythology."
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