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Petey Opussum Ii

Petey 'possum, pirates pipe picked a persimmon, puckered his profile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/13/2010 10:17:00 AM
Great Alliteration, Doris! I can imagine how happy that possum was of having a persimmon..Thank you for your comments! Yes,it snowed again but today it was raining a bit with a pretty cold easterly wind...Have a nice Sunday...Gert
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:55:00 PM
No need to wish you luck with this one, dear Doris!! It's already counted among the winners!! Excellent! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:48:00 PM
Wow, my tongue is in knots... Good one Doris....:JP]
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:43:00 PM
And oh, they can be so tart when they aren't quite ripe. Nice on, Doris. I can see the puckered possum, now. LOL Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:33:00 AM
hehehe!!
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:17:00 AM
Great write love the alliteration in it...Keep the creative and humorous writes flowing..Denki for stopping by and commenting on my work. Mom
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:48:00 AM
I find this form so difficult and you did such a wonderful job with this enchanting write.. Constance
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:17:00 AM
Too much fun Doris... shame the tongue twister contest is over .. this would be a terrific entry... appreciate your comments on my poetry today... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:17:00 AM
Great use of alliteration. The "Ps" are just popping out of this perplexing read. Good luck in the contest, Doris! Love, Carolyn
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