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Petey Opussum Ii

Petey 'possum, pirates pipe
picked a persimmon, puckered
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animalschildhoodalliteration

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Gert W. Knop

March 13, 2010 at 10:17 AM

Great Alliteration, Doris! I can imagine how happy that possum was of having a persimmon..Thank you for your comments! Yes,it snowed again but today it was raining a bit with a pretty cold easterly wind...Have a nice Sunday...Gert

Audrey Haick

March 12, 2010 at 3:55 PM

No need to wish you luck with this one, dear Doris!! It's already counted among the winners!! Excellent! Peace, Audrey

Jared Pickett

March 12, 2010 at 12:48 PM

Wow, my tongue is in knots... Good one Doris....:JP]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 12, 2010 at 12:43 PM

And oh, they can be so tart when they aren't quite ripe. Nice on, Doris. I can see the puckered possum, now. LOL Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2010 at 10:33 AM

hehehe!!

Sara Kendrick

March 12, 2010 at 8:17 AM

Great write love the alliteration in it...Keep the creative and humorous writes flowing..Denki for stopping by and commenting on my work. Mom

Constance La France

March 12, 2010 at 7:48 AM

I find this form so difficult and you did such a wonderful job with this enchanting write.. Constance

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 12, 2010 at 7:17 AM

Too much fun Doris... shame the tongue twister contest is over .. this would be a terrific entry... appreciate your comments on my poetry today... luv.. Linda-Marie..